Saturday, January 13, 2007

~*Marilyn @--}--


Now it's my turn to say
What's been said too many times.
You're flawless, I tell You, flawless.
We've made tributes to You
For years and years
Hiding Your real life and fears
Because who cares, right?
Not those look-alikes
They seem to be exactly You
With a slight difference
That You are You
And You are better.
It hurts them so much to admit
That You made them ugly
You made them cheat.
Despite that they were beautiful
Before becoming You
They should have been worshiped
May haps even more than You,
Mrs. to the poor, Miss to the rich
You are not creative, You're someone's creation
Not too pretty - just under beautification
You're a victim of apotheosis and sanctity
An elusive goddess in eternity.
Your life is one fragile ambiguity
Illuminated by discrepancies of your tears
You're decrepit
You're pure poison
You're dead
Yet You never rot.
You can innocently kill everybody
Even Yourself.
You're flawless, I tell You, flawless!
You made people wonder and never know.
Simple. Because You're the only Marilyn Monroe.
*Note: I'm sorry I have been away. We all have harder times, eh? Well, I'd like everyone to join me and celebrate my blogger anniversary :D It's been a year! Thank You everybody who have read and commented on my poetry and epics. I wouldn't have made it without You! HUGS!

38 comments:

Anonymous said...

A year! So many things happened...
You're now old enough to vote, drink, drive and ekhmmm... u know :D

Lovely MM, woman, who's still not forgotten. Woman, who seemed just another 'blond & stupid' but yet had something what made her the one and only. Popular but lonely. We'll never even know what was the real reason of her death...

Keep writing, keep drawing, keep doing whatever you like :)
Girl, you know there always will be someone to read and look at your work :)

Edyta said...

OMG, yeah, a whole year! Time slipped by too fast. Yeah, I am old enough to do anything now. Earlier i had to do it illegally. But... well-uh. What's prohibited is more fun :P
Yeah, MM seemed to smile but deep inside she was crying. She wanted loyalty, love, a family, instead she got fame & fortune, she didn't want that. She is one of the world's unsolved myteries and may haps crimes, u never know :)

Josh said...

Glad you're back Edyta. :)

I like the poem. Her apotheosis began even before she died, and I'm certain that all the fame and adoration was taxing on her mental health. There will never be another Marilyn Monroe.

Happy Anniversary!

Edyta said...

Josh!
"Her apotheosis began even before she died" u r dead right. 7 This causes a lot of problems in her further life & may haps this pushed her to commit suicide, if she did, that is.
She remains a remarkable legend until now.
& Thanx Joshua!

Anonymous said...

hmm i just finished ur great poem really i liked it :) so keep on every one loves ur poems :D u r the best writer ;) in fact i loved Marilyn Monroe she was so pretty well god blesses her ;) so sorry cuz my comment was so late :)

Edyta said...

Yorkie:*
I think everyone knows that u r never late to write me here, u can write me anytime as much as u want, that's one thing. Another thing is that i totally agree with you abt Ms Marilyn Monroe, she was quite beautiful after her beautification. Sadly, i have seen only one movie with her and... well i hope to see many more :)
& thanx for saying that it was a good poem. i tried hard :) muaaaah :D luv ya loads ;)

Anonymous said...

ur welcome baby :) don't thank me ;) and shhhh muaaaaaaaaah i love u more :P so shut up ;)

Edyta said...

we will see, we will see yorkie, to be continued :P

xianfu said...

doINk!

MM.... an icon.. during da old era....okay, wat crap am Im taking abt?.. haha

hAppY BLOg anNivERSARY dD!!! :)
it'S been A yEAR... N Ur readER is coMing back for moRE... I duNNO.. but... uR Blog ROcKS! *ALmost like Pink Floyd..but they r better*

hehe

hAve fUN dD...goTTa go 2 WOrK NOW...

PAPA!

Edyta said...

Bro!
I am SOOOOOO happy u found work :P at last i will be able to steal ur do' & put it into my piggybag :P wooopsieee, too many details. nevertheless, i missed u sooooo much :D am i really sayign this? geez. good to know that u r working all the free party space i can have now that u mostly r gone. even my eternal period doesnt bug me :D whaahahaa :D & ewwwww whats that smell? u havent washed hamstie? DAMNIT! *pukes on tsar's frshly wased floor* woopsieee :|
sp many things slip oytta me nowadays. ewww.
hugs!!
tata tsar :)

Dan said...

Happy Anniversary Edyta!

Marilyn Monroe was the best. Have you seen her movies? She was really a wonderful actress. I loved her in "Niagra" and "Some Like it Hot" and so many others.

Hugs and kisses.

Edyta said...

Dan!
Yup, of course. I loooooved "Some Like it HOT". I mean..
- I'm a guy!
- Eh, no one's perfect :D
OMG myself & my mum ALWAYS QUOTE THAT when we're having a shitty day. We also always quote another retro movie (or a book <-- choose the option u like more) Maninly "Gone With The Wind" & "Let's think about this tomorrow" :)if really, i liked both the book & the movie. Classics :)

String said...

Lovely collage and poem. Something about MM was soft dewy, sexy and detached all at once...no one can replicate her. I like the way the poem moves and changes, becomes dark and then substantial, good work.

Edyta said...

String
Thank You. I totally agree with You: sexy & detached. She's a mixture of everything beautiful. What I have seen on the net is that there are loads of her lookalikes. May haps they are beautiful but there is only one MM. Thanx for Your opinion :)

String said...

Already added your link! - MM was heavenly in many ways quite a constrast...who wants to be her? She was one of a kind.

Edyta said...

String
Me too me too.
Undoubtedly she is. & i agree, quite a contast she was. Only WAS. :(

Josh said...

Hey girl, I posted the answers to the quiz finally. :)

Sorry to say you only got a handful of them right, but don't feel bad; my bf only got 7 out of 12 right. The resemblance between the two groups is uncanny!

Edyta said...

Naughty naughty Josh :(
It was a hard test for me. They looked all gay. I just couldnt tell the difference :| LOL
i know i know, i suck.

Ashley said...

I love your avatar! You're gorgeous!

Edyta said...

Ashley!
LOL, that's soooo sweet of ya :*~ U kind kind thing ;)

xianfu said...

..... DEAR MY HUGE FAV SIS.. D to da D

hmm.. "I will always love you"

:)

n ur new laptop, aren't you're going to decorate with glitters n stuffs? haha

n yes sis.. I left my blog to rot.. maybe I will clean up the mess later onli if mom n dad will eat my FAMOUS SPECIALLY MADE OMEeLLETE since I'm adopted.. hahahahaha

ps: I took hamstie away AGAIN.. HE IS MINNEEEE!!!

Edyta said...

Oh dear dear tsar.
Our parents already ate whatever u served.
NOW GO UPDATE UR BLOG.
"..... DEAR MY HUGE FAV SIS.. D to da D"
Oh u invented a rap song 4 me! How sweeeeeet.

Ashley said...

Put up a new post gorgeous!!!

Edyta said...

I'd luv to, Ash, I'm just ill now :S hope to get better ;)
HUGS!

Frank Marcopolos said...

muchos kudos.

Edyta said...

Brooklyn Frank
Kudos to ya too! LOADS!

Ashley said...

Thanks for all your comments! they mean a lot to me gorgeous!!

Edyta said...

yar welcome, ash ;)

Ashley said...

I think I am finally going to leave him...

Edyta said...

that's good news :)

Caz said...

Thanks for the visit and the comment :) Love your blog - very different and inspired. I'm with you on Marilyn... the whole Anna Nicole thing led me to read up on Marilyn and what a heartbreaking story it is!

Edyta said...

Caz!
Oh yes it is! & The Ana Nicole Smith thing is rather strange. I've read someone say:"A.N.Smith wanted to be Marilyn. Well at least they died in a more or less similar way"
Thanx for stopping by!

Nikki said...

did you ever email Ashley??

I'm worried.

Nikki said...

I mean have you heard from her?

Jay said...

Hello. Happy Blog Anniversary.

I don't know for sure how I made my way to your blog, but I'm glad I did.

Edyta said...

Hiya Jay!
Thanx for greeting me with the anniversary :)
I'm glad that You did too :)

Anonymous said...

Hi there you get a lot of comments!

I wanted to remark on that Steven King quote (in so many words):"only enemies tell the truth: friends lie out of duty" Do you really belive that? Obviously there's truth in the quotation but ... (Well I don't know what to say!) I tend to be frank to a fault sometimes. Maybe that's why I take issue with it...(??)

ANYway, you must come see my blog; it's at gledwood2.blogspot. It's very different, my secret diary blog. So go there if you want to read all someone else's secrets!! & I update daily (OK at NEARLY daily) even if it kills me. You're welcome to drop by. All the best 2u from

Gledwood

Edyta said...

Gledwood
Hey! Someone else's secrets? I guess mostly every blog is more or less a diary or a store of someone's thougts & feelings & these things r mostly secrets. i tend to store my visions in stories & poems. & my feelings in a book that no one can see :)
thanx for stopping by & surely i will check ur place out: my pleasure :)

 

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