Get out.
I don't want to know people
They just slip away
& then I suffer & I cry
But they don't know that, do they?
I hate to be connected
To people
They just disconnect
like a broken modem
& a chat friend
goes offline.
People hate to know you.
'Cuz they start to love you
You get. Sick. Diseased.
Deceased.
Someone asked u to?
You go offline
Just like a contact
In i seek you
I don't want to seek you
But you somehow find me
On the streets
In the bus
In the supermarket
You buy cigarettes
I buy morphine
Killing ourselves calmly
Is how we start to
fall in love.
Then we go offline
I haven't sought u
on time
In my youth I'd tell you
I don't smoke
You don't drink
Why not hang out together
for a glass of wine
& a ciggie
some cancer
& asthma
To be on time
Connection error
User went offline
...online funeral, anyone?
Monday, June 04, 2007
//...ICQ...(2007)
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Wonderful stuff, Edyta. Since I have a lousy internet connection, my friends are constantly dying online. Or am I killing them?
I hope you are well, my friend! Hugs and smooches from the three of us over here.
P.S. You're first on my latest post. I'm first on yours. :)
Hey Dan, is it me, or u somehow sounded sad a bit :S well, u r not killing them. in my poem i meant that death is so unexpected & ppl die like those ppl in our contact lists that go offline :)
baby amazing poem !! how did u know to write it by ur self?:P sweetie ur poem reminded me with alot of friends i've lost itsnot a must that they died but they just disappeared from ur life anyway ur so emotional baby but psss.. i knew it when i was looking at ur eyes :P also sweeeet song one last good bye :P baby ur heart yearned to stay ? :| well baby don't be sad samael said life is short but long in living going forth on the uncertain paths of the future :| \m/ i trust them ;) love u so much baby :)
Yorkie,
Yup i am emotional :) I'm sorry :| :P:P
samael said:" life is short but long in living going forth on the uncertain paths of the future :|"
translate. i didnt get it :)
hmmm let me tell u sweetie well they said life is sooo short it means it will end soo fast and soo soon but althought its so short but soo hard and difficult to live it :| alot of troubles to live our life and forth on the uncertain paths of the future it means althought of all that ppl r living it although they r taking the wrong way in their future i think so baby and thats right :) muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah lickable :P ( no kissess for bf ;( ? ) bamoot feki :P
awwwww, that's right :|
kisses! :*******~~~ muaaaaaaaah ;DD~
bamoot feek ya alby :)
What a wonderful talent you are. Love your poem and keep writing.
Wonderful, but sad poem. People just go away in real life and online. They just go *poof* sometimes.
Wow, that was really powerful edyta. Girl, you never seem to stop amaze me with your talents!
Drama Diva!
Talent? naaaah :) not at all. though u made my day saying that u liked it :)
Jay!
Thats right! thats the exact message i wanted to send to everyone! yaaaaaay! it's kinda sad :|
Crashieee!
Whyyy r ya so sweet? Talents? What talents? :D
Yeah man that is good. And unlike my poems you don't write like it's still the year 1857 ... that IS good
Re the film I stole it of course for my video random blog
one question: are you over 5 foot 8 inches/170 cm tall?
c'mon you know why i'm asking that question!
Gleds!
OMG! U ALWAYS CRACK ME UP! whahhahha :D like 1857 :D omg, even my eyes r teary from luaghter. i need to go to the mental hospital really!
i'm abt 1.73 or 4 or 2 hell knows. something like that. now really. WHY?
re the photos - be a model!
you must be at least 5ft 8in which is 170cm I'm sure
that is the minimum height for catwalk/"runway"...
easy money, eds. EASY MONEY!!
at least go to an agency and find out
you already seem to know people who can take your photobook for you.
do not pay any introductory fees seriously to any of these agencies
come to London - loads of work here then of course paris, milan, new york
come on!
Gledss!
abt modelling :D haha, u want me to say good bye to FOOD? all that awesome wonderful FOOD? Those yummie tasty cooking posts? NOOOOOOOO! LOL!
I mean to become a model i have to be half size as i am. No food? But i LUV IT! hehe :D
its futile to tell u d special connection i have wid tis poem. was so much in sync wid ur words, read it like a slice of my life. served from a fren who knows me well;)
"People hate to know you.
'Cuz they start to love you"----very true. i indeed prefer my solitude to prevent another fall off. n dats wat me doin these days.
"I don't want to seek you
But you somehow find me
On the streets
In the bus
In the supermarket"--wen u run from sumthing u catch it at every knook n corner of ur life, so i stopped running frm it, i rather started chasing it n so it ran away from me, never to get back....
"In my youth I'd tell you
I don't smoke
You don't drink"--a gimmick so common to d youth, n sumhw works most of d times. Strangely....
Why did it giv me a feel dat u missing sum1? or missed sum1 at dat moment, or wanted to talk to sum1 but cudnt get him thru. if dats so...lemme knw....sumhow my hunches tell so.
DD!!! IM BAK... MISS meeeeeeee??? say u doo.. hahahahahahah... I notice u remove my quote Dd... arhhh... :) and u replace it with an even better quote.. heeeee xD
WELL... theres a sad poem there..in ur new post Dd... I can feel the sadness.. It reminds me of my offline friend too.. We were close back then..when after being connected back after a few years, we were disconnected and the onli thing left is just memory.. sad stuffs... I read this book somewhere "100simple tips on how to be happy".. Yeah, I was feeling kinda down that tIMe.. Sometimes, We just gotta let go and not try 2 ponder on how and what we can do.. xD
I FEEL philosophical.. hah! Well, is the online funeral on? Count me in.. I bring some rums and write some pretty nice n decent eulogy for our offline friends? It's been a while..muahahahahhahaha
on the bright side, I just watched Shrek3.. wasnt as brilliant I hoped too..since I read many people commenting shrek1,2 are awesome movies.. Still, I like when Donkey made d innocent look in front of d cHARMing's soldiers.. IT WAS SERIOUSLY HILLARIOUS!!!... hahahahahaaha.. arrhh..Shrek d ogre..time to retire dun ya think?
BUT! I LOVE BLADES OF GLORY BY WILL FERELL.. Dd, u shall totally watch tat movie! 2 hours of pure laughing material.. couldnt contain myself and i almost peed when i laughed that hard...!!! :)
well tats all i can get to knock ur head wit my writings :) ANDDDD DUN PUke on d flOOR AGAIN XD.. U always do tat after reading my comment.. Bad habit and ya shall change it or ya shall be hobbit Dd
miSS Ya!!... t.CAre
tSAR
PS: I LUV DD :) KeEP UP d MARVerllous worK
Ravi,
indeed, it was quite an experience, u see ahmed's friend died so suddenly becoz of cancer & my own friends were beaten up on their way home. i was sooo saddened by all of this. it was just too much & too sad, ya know? this afeected me & i wrote this poem.
Hiya Tsarey,
Yup, Shrek 3 was a blast. I loved all of the Shreks. LOL. Did ya love the gingerbread man? yumieeee!
Thanx Tsar for ur support. Yup it's something sad, this poem. I felt bad back then. Truly. Hopefully better days shall come.
ah... I hope that you're fine now...
sometimes the internet connection is sucks.
I heard about shrek 3....
I love this movie! And I couldn't stop laughing when the gingerbread man was recalling his memories, singing "lolipop" song.. haha...
;D
... GINGERMAN!! i call him gingerman.. hes so ADORABLE!! i feel like I want to eat him... hahahaahaha :)
bttr days shall come..it always does..
abt d story abt d guy.. yeah... it's a tragic story.. why d heck was d lifeguard doing..leaving d body at there.. gosh..Im jz hoping those kids dont know tats a body n jz thought innocently tats a tourist whos look bloated n having a blast
arhh... i got some memory lost i think..couldnt recall much of d shrek story.. hahaha :) but I knew it was a hilarious moviE.. xD
skol is over NOW.. whats yA plAN dD? become a food journalist? travel across d world tasting exotic food? I know it's ya dReam :)
CurryEgg!
Aint u just a sweetieee??? Shrek 3 was hilarious! Espesh GINGIE! LOL!
OH! i simply adoreeeeed ur post abt ur hometown. COOL!
Tsaery!
GINGIE LOOKED TASTY... as u... OOPSIE. i am just hungry. i need to have this food journalist job. PRONTO. NOW. I AM HUNGRY HERE!
Your whole being is a big talents edyta ;) You've got creative layers girl!
HUNGRY?
TAKE SOME OREOS :)
Crashie!
My whole being? LOL! no one wants to be me! have u ever seen the powerpuff girls? hehe. no one wanted to be bubbles :| LOL!
Tsarey!
DD: *drooling* tsarey.. hun... u look tasty... in fact u remind me of cheeseburgers! aaaahhh
Nice. It really strikes at the heart of the transitive, sometimes fleeting nature of relationships online. Friends seem to come and go much more easily online than in real life... for better or worse.
I love that picture - where did you find it???
New to your blog, found you through Drama Diva... actually, your name caught my attention: I love Edyta Gorniak, the singer, so... :)
No to w takim razie od dzisiaj mozemy pisac po polsku! :)
Dziekuje za komentaz - ja nigdzie bez obcasow nie pojde! Mam kompleks Napoleonski - on inwadowal kraje, a ja inwaduje sklepy z butami! :D
Narazie
Czyzbym byla tak przezroczysta? :)
Ja sie urodzilam w szpilkach...!
Narazie
classy!
Watpie ze to moja rodzicielka tak wziela...
No, dobra, daje sobie spokoju, bo to glupio wyglada jak tylko ja kommentuje... narazie, trzymaj sie!
u remind me of madonna saying "no one will know the real me, ever" saying i hate to be connected. u always will be connected in some way to people. just get over it!
sorry my little joke
i know it is just a poem
anyway, how are you??
oh if you are bubbles I can be buttercup - I've got the matching hair and attitude!
Mojo Jojo, be aware! hehehe
Kiedy bede mogla poczytac cos nowego? ;)
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not won
sorry
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Another excellent post, great poem. Love the picture too.
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