Saturday, July 28, 2007

Hints Of Erotica [2007]


Well,
There are sometimes sheets
When it's colder, of course
Then there is a silhouette
That is seen with closed eyes
And a taste of sweat
Hints of erotica

Then there is a voice
So helpless
And vivid visions
Of passion, lust and indulgence
One is a disease
Another - the antidote
Total interference
Predictable roads
And a hint of erotica

The journey is to lessen the distance
Between the two
By smiles, gestures
And secrets
Between me and you
With a hint of erotica

You see,
Sometimes we merge
pornographically
It's faster and safer:
No time to embarrass
one's a giver, the other's a taker
no time for erotica.

You see,
It takes courage
to allow the breaking
of boundaries between us
It also takes talent
of persuasion
with slight hints of erotica

See,
the journey isn't over
if there is no distance
because the two roads converge.
Aims, visions, goals
inevitable thoughts
In a word:
pleasure is for those who
will forever be caught
In chains of sensual erotica.
Art by Luis Royo

58 comments:

Anonymous said...

well.. i read ur poem its cool poem but as u know erotic things is soooo stupid thing and doesn't deserve to write apoem abt it .. but i loved ur writting i told u before only stupid ppl who cares abt it and as u know our world is sooo interested in they dunno abt the fact cuz they think freedom means sex or something but in reallity sex only for animals not human beings its my point view ;)

Edyta said...

yorkie:*~
i agree with at a point :) there is to much gore & violence in sex nowadays. & surely everyone is sooo fond of pornography. i dont like that either. i see the animal instinct in that as i wrote in this verse:
"you see,
sometimes we merge
pornographically
its faster and safer:
no time to embarrass
one's a giver, the other's a taker
no time for erotica."
i think a bit of erotica is a form of art which is very beautiful & highly aethetic.
its fine, if u dont agree with me. everyone can have their opinions :) but that's mine & that's urs :)
luv u still :)

Anonymous said...

yes baby i agree with u :) keep writting i love it i want u unique not only cuz ur my gf but as i am ur fan :) love u too :)

Edyta said...

wait...
u r my fan? O.O
yaaay! look at meee, i have fans!

Anonymous said...

yes i am ur special fan who supports u :) just listen to ur bf cuz know works for u ;) ur my angel!!!

Edyta said...

yorkie:*~
awwwww, that's soooooooo sweet!
well i guess i am ur fan too :)

Dizzie said...

Wooooohooooo....

Czy panna nie jest za mala na takie zbrezienstwa? ;)

Edyta said...

Hart,
no wiesz.. lepiej za rano niz za pozno :D

Dizzie said...

Haha!

Nie, nie obraz sie, ja tylko zartuje... ale na 19-letnia katoliczke! Oh, do nieba cie nie wpuszcza! ;)

A ty pisz sobie ile kommentazy na moim blogu, ile chcesz - lubie byc popularna! :D

Edyta said...

Hart,
nie wpuszcza...
ale wiesz, nie mam czego bac sie, ino kupilam wlasnie indulgencje. do konca zycia starczy :D
jezeli bedziesz miala mysle, iz klamie.. mam zdjecie z mnichem, ktory mi ja sprzedal :D haha

Dizzie said...

HUGA!

:)

Sluchaj, po co nam niebo? W piekle cieplej, przytulnie... pelno znajomych...! ;)

Jak chcesz sobie pogadac, to wyslij mi maila!

Josh said...

Loved it. Very evocative, and made me think about my own current situation and the decisions that remain to be made. Nice job. :)

Edyta said...

Hart,
Pewnie. Lucek, Lilka (Lilith), Mefistus, Satanek i inni znajomi :D

Edyta said...

Josh,
Thank you. To hear the word "evocative" from u is the same as a sunshine after a rain. Ur opinion really means a lot to me. A LOT.

String said...

I love erotica - just recently a friend on myspace got totally slammed for writing an honest erotic piece about her life. Excellent poem. So London eh? Heh heh, figures....

Edyta said...

String,
Slammed?
OK. Obviously ppl dunno where'd the beautiful erotica & where's solid porn. eh...

String said...

Yeah no kidding. I was just thinking about this concept this morning and how most Americans are taught to feel that sex is taboo, unless it is under certain 'rules' so people turn to porn to be 'turned on' because they are so freaking repressed. European culture in many ways is better and a bit more entertaining of erotica.

Dizzie said...

Haha, ja ich po imieniu nie znam...! :D

Moj mail na moim profilu...

Gledwood said...

"See,
the journey isn't over
if there is no distance


I like that!

Gledwood said...

" and sorry; forgot to close quotation marks. How typically me. Sorry have not been round earlier. Have not been anywhere. Life was in chaos over the past 4tnight. So have just posted and go. I have about 2 or 3 "memes" I'm meant to do.... not that I really know what a "meme" is ... do you ..???

Edyta said...

String,
"are taught to feel that sex is taboo"
well thats awful. why do i see art in everything except porn? i see this beautiful poetry & art in erotica. Even in Dita von Teese, she sees art in burlesque & tries to convince ppl that stripper isnt such a bad word & it DOESNT always mean neon bikinis or topless none coherent moves! i agree with her fully!
It's awesome to know our thoughts merged here as well!

Edyta said...

Hart,
omg... O.O... ja TAKA slepa? ewwww. zaraz poszukam LEPIEJ.
Ja to jakos znajomych po imeiniu wiem, po prostu wiesz, domowilam sie z Lucyferem, Lilith, Mefistofilesem oraz Szatanem nazywac ich zdrobiniale. Lovingly, as they say :D

Edyta said...

Gleds,
a meme? well, i like the name. MEME. Haha... well maybe it stands for everything abt ME & only ME?
well, would love to read ur MEME :D

& nevermind the quotes. U can quote me anytime as long as u think the words r worth it :D

xianfu said...

neW UPdate? Poem?

i jz woke Up n click 2 link 2 ya bLog..n woOla!.. A rude suprise Dd.. u UPDATED.. is tat a hint or someThing? .. LOL...

waaaa.. ppl been giving comments abt d poem.. i havent read it yet.. u know hw SLOW is ur lil bro in reading.. daaahhh.. u shld teach me how 2 read faster xD

T.caRe!

ABT Ur red shoes.. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I kinda.........

LEFT IT......


AT.....



YORKIE'S!

pAPa!

Dan said...

Fabulous Eddy!

A poem about life, about relationships, with a hint of erotica! :)

Hugs Eddy!

Edyta said...

Tsar,
RUDE surprize? Yessss! I love being rude.
& i luv rude ppl. hahaha we meanies ruleee!
u havent read it yet? awww its ok. u sooooo dont have too.
oh wait. u have too. cuz i have hamstiee. muahahahahah. buhahahhaha. ahahhaahhah. ok i am done with the sinister laugh. cuz i have to run along now. to yorkie's. to get my RED shoes. dont tell me u too have been wearing them! nooooooooooooo! noooooooooooo! <-- screaming in slow motion

Edyta said...

Dan,
really? U liked it? awwww!
well it aint fabulous but i did my best :D

HUGS!

Dizzie said...

No pewnie, ale ja z nimi jeszcze nie jestem na ty... moze mnie zapoznasz? ;)

Edyta said...

Hart,
Juz teraz na ty? :D
oni juz dawno chcieli z toba zapoznac sie... to ja caly czas zwlekalam z tym...

Crashdummie said...

wiiiiiiiiii talk abt "lust is in the air". Whacha been sniffing on dudette.. and may i get some too? hehehe

Wicked poem though, me like!

Dizzie said...

A Bubek to gdzie? Znaczy sie, Belzebubek... :)

Masz hotmail, gmail czy yahoo?

Edyta said...

Hart,
ponownie nie moge zajsc na twoj blog... zatrzelcie mnie!
o jak raz jego nie znalam, milo zapoznac sie! :D haha

ps. yahoo

Edyta said...

Crashie,
OMG. I got caught redhanded. I have been sniffin... perfume? can i get away with that one?
& suree u can any u want & more :D

Dizzie said...

No to:
dzbrog
potem malpa
ten sam mail co ty i
com

Masz?

Edyta said...

mam :)

Jay said...

Wow! Beautiful poem. You're an amazing writer.

So many people don't see the difference between erotica and porn. To the closed minded it's all porn, which is really stupid.

"Even in Dita von Teese, she sees art in burlesque & tries to convince ppl that stripper isnt such a bad word..."

I keep trying to tell people that strippers are good people too. So many won't believe me though. ;-)

Edyta said...

haha, Jay!
Ur stalking me? ME LIKES :D
& i DO agree with u on every point :)
let's all open an erotica club :D

Jay said...

Edyta ... ME? stalking you?? No no no .. just accidentally showing up in the same places that you go. Yeah, that's it .... it's all a coinkydink. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. LOL ;-)

Edyta said...

hahahha :D crack up!
DO continue accidentally showing up. & we need to buy a life time supply of tequila! who knows when shall it be gone? *shivers in fear*

Kao said...

wow!!!!

lots of comments!!!...


ejem,, well, amazing poem... it IS sensual, if you wanted to evoke a time you suffered from this disease you have got it completey right!!!

but i must say that spanish have a whole world more of word to describe this unique experiences... :P

well, about what i wrote, i feel sorry to say thet it was all the story... 'cause it telll what's happening right now... and nothing worth of writting has hapened lately, so i'm concentrated on towo things: a theatre play and a short story.. hope i'll upload them when i come back to college (that's next month)


so, thanx for the comment on my writting of life...

i repeat: your poem is amazing, sensual, captivating... well i can't think of another adjective to describe what it made me feel.. xD

see you, kisssssssssssssses and hugs...®

curryegg said...

This post is meaningful to me.. it's about life.. two road diverge.. hehe... good.. ;D

Edyta said...

Kao,
Thanx. I'd LOVE to learn spanish. It sounds sexy when i hear it. Nope, i cant help myself. haha :D
& thanx for ur kind words abt my poem. Ya know it's none of my personal experience but it is what more or less i see in life. There is not erotica between couples just non-sensual sex or whatever. That aint no fin at all.
But love is all abt fun, even if the jokes get dirty - they should be candid & fun.
I will wait for ur short story & play. haha :D
HUGS & Kisses!

Edyta said...

Curryegg!
Awww, thanx soooo much, u r a daaahrling! & it's nice to know it was meaningful to u. yaaaaay! i feel i've acomplished something. weee :D haha. ok, i am NOT by any chance THAT vain. Just a bit :D

Dan said...

Don't argue with me. It's fabulous. :)

Edyta said...

Yes, sir.

Dizzie said...

Hej, ty, sluchaj, bo Bubek cos mi nabrzeczyl, ze mu sie podobasz... a Lilka wsciekla!!!
Uwarzaj na siebie! :D

Crashdummie said...

perfume? aaaaah in that case ur excused! Have i gotten myself into trouble when i meet men who smell oh-so-divine.... once I almost stalked one lad! *whoopsie*

wiiiiiiiiiii guess who's coming to lithuania in few weeks!!! :D

Edyta said...

Ruby?
WHOM?

Crashdummie said...

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! wiiiiiiiii *does the happy dance*

Edyta said...

*joins the happy dance*!

Dizzie said...

Hey... kiedy bedzie nowa notka? ;)

Kao said...

hehehe thnxs, it was cool to have some nice words for my comment... xD

well I uploaded the short story... I'm witing for ur post... xD

so hope you like it... xD

see you, kisssssssssssssses and hugs...®

Kao said...

wait!!! u have fans???

why don't I have any???

well, I'm your fan too xD


kissssssssses again... xD

xianfu said...

AWWWW DEAR SIS..

DUN U just love my RUDENESS :X


hmAUuauaua.. btw.i jz came bak from this camping..where i got leeches on my pants :)

Edyta said...

awww, u came back from camping? how sweeet!

eric1313 said...

So glad to have come by--I love this poem. I write poetry and I'm always glad to read other's poems, especially when they are this good.

Nothing like a hint of erotica. Porno is bad but real love and lust and passion are the bomb.

Edyta said...

lust and passion are the bomb.

ahh. these words r like oxygen for my lungs.

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