Thursday, January 26, 2006

BUY* ME (**Or Get me Free)




Sell me Stretch me
Buy me Hurt me
Get me Thrill me
Take me Deceive me
Rape me Fight me
Fuck me Release me
Break me Bury me
Fake me Improve me
Copy me Deny me
Kill me Drive me
Feel me Ride me
Reject me Save me
Prevent me Free me
Create me Torture me
Cut me Carry me
Call me Suck me
Devour me Ignore me
Curse me Chop me
Force me Irritate me
Make me Put me
Draw me Embarrass me
Write me Shoot me
Hate me Hang me
Greet me Drown me
Delete me Pin me
Erase me Frustrate me
Remove me Change me
Destroy me Frighten me
Surround me Fool me
Abandon me Bruise me
Leave me Lose me
Please me Bet me
Satisfy me Regret me
Pay me Refuse me
Give me Tease me
Want me Doubt me

All this and more is yours if you
Keep me hostage.
Don't call us, we'll call you.
Enjoy.
eBay. Always a bargain.

15 comments:

Howie Dewitt. said...

you are an excellent writer. is this a hobby or something you are pursuing. i am hoping it's both.

Astronaut said...

Great writing. I don't know what to say, it is just...great.

Astronaut said...

BTW-Does this kind of writing come simple to you? I would say you write like i take photos, i guess we all express ourselves in different ways. There will be some more pics soon.

Edyta said...

Ka$hassination
thanx. not sure what writing is to me. but i think that it's something Sam said. Expressing myself. It's something like a hobby, like a passion. Dunno. Tough one :)

Sam
Your pics r amazing. Can't wait for more. *drooling*
Does writing come simple? This piece - yes. But in general it depends. I have the tendency to catch writer's blocks.

Astronaut said...

Thanks, there will be some tomorrow, there just has to be.

Edyta said...

Sunder
Keeping it up *thumbs up*
Thanx for ur niceee comments :)~

Anonymous said...

That was a nice work edda...keep it up....i really love reading ur poems and stories..its all different...and im always eager to read ur new stories and poems...keep it up....

Edyta said...

whoaaa
My comment appeared before urs Sunder!
That means only one thing... I'm a mind reader!
Boo! :D~

yana said...

"BUY* ME (**Or Get me Free"...i luv this, edyta. i really do. fantastic stuff. truly. ; D. super talented and you know it! muhahaha.gimme your skills now!!! i'm prepared to sell my soul or buy it. lol. ;p

Edyta said...

mangue_chiquita
As emperor of the world i proudly present u with writing skills.
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Now give me ur soul!
(I forgot to mention that i ur magesty (me) is veeery greedy) lol ;DDD~

yana said...

yeah! here's my soul sold for the hundredth time. hehe. yeeees! skills all for me. lol. forgot? i'm honoured! i think i'm more greedy, your majesty. please forgive me. ; D. all hail, queen edyta! lol. ; p

Edyta said...

mangue_chiquita
'please forgive me. ; D'
u r forgiven.
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'here's my soul sold for the hundredth time.'
Now give me ur soul for the 101 time. lol i never give up ;D~

yana said...

yay! *chucks a party* i am forgiven. hehe. no worries, here's my soul for the 101th time. i gladly hand it over b/c it's worth it. lol. ; D. i have many souls to sell. lol.

yana said...

some not even mine. lol. ; p

Edyta said...

mangue_chiquita
'some not even mine. lol. ; p '
sounds so evil.... i like it ;D~ ;P

 

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