Tuesday, July 11, 2006

*~The Sisterhood [Part 6]~*

I know I promised to bring it earlier. But one member of my family died. I needed some time. But as they say... It's better later than never... Or something like that. I hope you enjoy the last part of The Sisterhood. :) I wanna thank everyone who read it and wrote me their opinions, questions, ideas... That was very sweet of you. I have a lot of other things to share with you :) I think I shall share some poetry with you next time:) Oh well, meanwhile here's part 6... Lemme know whatcha think LOL :) Hope you all r fine and as Sam would say: Peace & Happiness to all. (In fact... Nope, not to all :P :D~)
***
'Ana?', I said when I was in front of her doorstep, 'Ana... I need to talk to you. When can we go to the temple?'
'Chris? It's early morning... What are you talking about? What temple? When? Chris, what are you doing here?' Ana couldn't understand what I was talking about.
'Ana... Just tell me, when we can go to the Temple Of Silvia?' I said it, Ana's eyes started glowing as if she suddenly regained consciousness.
'Come in.' she said.
So I did. I felt rather uncomfortable; I had a bad dream, my wife was dead and I suddenly came to the house of a certain prostitute to whom I've always come and she wasn't and never has been a member of the Sisterhood. She was not a Badhelian. Rewind... What?
She stood in her purple night gown looking at me with strange eyes; I saw some delight in them. I also saw some pain. One thing I knew for sure; hell, she was interested. She was interested in my actions. She wanted to be my right hand man. Woman, whatever.
She came near me and started kissing me on the lips. It was something like a routine to her, I wasn't against but this time this kiss was out of place. But me, as a man, I didn't mind.
'You want to see those dungeons? You will risk it, Chris? We could be caught.'
'Ana... I need to see it. I need to find a way to prevent The Sisterhood from becoming a religion, a cult. I want to prevent it from the world. I want it to vanish again. Like that time.'
'She knew that it was time for the sisterhood to disappear to be able to come back again.'
I shivered. I was hearing voices? Ana looked at me because she noticed me looking peculiar.
'Tomorrow, Chris. We will see the Temple of Silvia tomorrow. Not today, Chris. I have work today.'
'Ok, Ana.'
This time I kissed her. Not to express my gratitude but to let her know that she was THE BITCH and I was her master.
I went out of Ana's home. I was feeling dizzy. Heck, I was feeling like a used Snickers wrapper paper. All those thoughts? What did they mean? I had a mixture of feelings every time I saw Ana. I wanted to love her but I wanted to enslave her. I wanted to kiss her but I wanted to hit her. I was thinking about my wife but that prostitute's faces appeared in front of mine. I didn't like this mixture.
'Chris?'
'Holy crap, Mike. You scared the shit out of me.'
'That's why I am a police officer. Where were you on the 9th of August, 1996?'
'Drinking my ass off with you, sir.'
'Damn. Let's not put it in the record.'
Tell him or not? Tell him or not? Tell him! Tell him! Tell him!
'Mike?'
... Or not.
'Yeah, Chris?'

'Oh, nothing. There is this guy monk walking around after me.'
'Ah, I know this fellow, nice fellow, indeed.'
'But he is insane.'
'No he ain't. He's a normal guy, just like us 2. Just he chose his God.'
'You talk a lot with him?'
'Yeah sure, Christopher. But I hear you like your new girlfriend. Hope you know she is a prostitute.'
'She is not my girl...'
'Say, Chris? I fucked her when my wife died.'
I was shocked. I couldn't speak for a moment. He said that he slept with someone called Elizabeth. Her name was Ana, this I knew solidly.
'Mike! You told me her name was Elizabeth! Elizabeth!'
'Is it difficult for you to say that your name is Mike, Chris?'
With this he left. He left me and my thoughts. As well as my fears. So that night we all slept with Ana? I mean Elizabeth. I mean with Ana. With THE BITCH?
I went home and I didn't come out. It was raining. Good thing that we didn't go to the dungeons of The Temple of Silvia today. We would be as wet as sunken ships. This thing has always scared me: Ship Cemeteries. Somewhere there, under those gallons of water so many ships are laying, inhabited by sharks. Inhabited by other fish. Those dark rooms where the sun doesn't reach are as dead as the people who sunk with the ship or who sunk overboard. Those ships are like people. They died. Like those planes that crashed and sank in the ocean. Water is a dangerous thing. Water and women are dangerous.
With such thoughts my day ended. Now I looked forward to visiting the temple. I knew something had to be done; I wanted to kill the so-called Silvia of today. Without the leader the tribe is nothing. Ah, yes, my beautiful knife. That's the stuff. I can already imagine it going into the body of Silvia, whoever she is. Tomorrow's a big day, champ. Ana, baby, I will do it for you. I will kill the bitch. I swear, baby, for you. I miss you but I still keep your diary locked although I want to know all of your secrets. I kiss it everyday, Ana. I miss you and your voice. Ana... You were the perfect wife. Were. Yes, the past from. You died, Aney, you left me alone. How badly I want you back. I still love my wife. My dead wife.
With such chaotic thoughts I went to bed. My mind was a mess. But I didn't dream anything. Not even about Ana, my wife. But I wanted.
***
Early in the morning that day Ana came to my house. She knocked on the door. I looked through the window; she was wearing a black dress. It was long but it stressed the beauty of her body. I let her in with no words.
'Chris... We must go. The sun almost reached the zenith. We can't go to the temple in the evening, it's more dangerous. Do you understand me? Also now, we will see the dungeons clearly because of the sun. It was raining yesterday. Hurry, Christopher.'
I hurried and got dressed. I took my knife. I ran out of the room along with Ana. But this time she was walking very fast. I couldn't catch up.
'Ana, wait, I can't go so fast. What's the rush? The sun won't hide in like... 7 hours!'
'Chris, they are the weakest before the sun reaches the zenith.'
'Who?'
'The Badhelians!'
'Ana, that's just a legend, they don't really exist. Or should I call you... Elizabeth?'
Ana came near me. She was furious.
'Don't you dare say anything about the job I have. And it's you, men, who are guilty in the deaths of your wives. Blame yourself.'
She started to walk away slowly. I followed her. She had a point. What was the difference, anyway?
'I'm sorry, Ana. I'm sorry.' I said.
She was silent. But then she spoke quietly to me.
'Did you have a dream? Did you dream of the Badhelians, Chris?'
I already wanted to nod and answer 'yes' when she told me not to answer.
'Me too. They are waiting for us and it's better if we go when they are weaker.'
I regret saying that ship cemeteries are scary. History coming to life is much scarier. I almost started praying. But not to God. To Badhelia. Because it was that Goddess in whom I believed now. I had proof. Faith needs proof.
We entered the temple and I felt cold. Like someone was breathing on me with ice breath. It was a scary feeling. As we went deeper to the beyond I saw some glowing eyes in the dark and they weren't bats. They were girls. I saw some dark silhouettes; they weren't moving. They looked like statues. But I felt their stare at me. They were alive. I was walking behind Ana and I was holding her hand because I was more scared than her. A lot more scared. I was even shaking. Shaking because I was cold and shaking because I was scared.
We entered a large room. It took us ages to get here. But this room looked very familiar. It was the same room where Silvia killed those 2 Vikings in my dream. This room was very bright and it looked exactly the same... Only a couple of ages older.
I noticed something missing in me. I couldn't understand what.
'Let the ritual begin!' a woman screamed. I knew her. She was a widow. Wait... She sacrificed her own husband for the Sisterhood? She was young and beautiful. She wore a red dress.
I looked around this huge room and saw that there were a lot of girls here wearing different outfits. But all of the dresses were made of silk. All of the girls were beautiful... I had a bizarre thought... Maybe they were friendly?
'Bring the man!' another woman screamed.
I felt some cold steel on my back. So much for friendliness.
'You shall die!' I heard this from a 12 year old girl.
I couldn't bear it. It was too much. I realized what was missing in my. Rather on me. Ana's hand. They caught her. They caught her. Now I am doomed. I have to find and kill the leader. Now or never. Come on, Chris. Don't be THE BITCH!
'Where is Silvia?' I screamed.
They were looking at me. But then one of them said:
'No man dares calling her name!'
'On your knees, slave!' Another girl told me. And I fell down on my knees. But I didn't give up.
'I need Silvia! Silvia! Silvia!' I screamed.
All of the sudden the Badhelians divided themselves into two groups and made way for a certain person. I already knew that it would be Silvia.
Silvia was walking slowly but she was sure of her actions. That girl came near me and smiled.
'Silvia?' I asked silently.
'No.' she replied and I felt that someone hit me from the behind.
I woke up after ten minutes all tied up on the floor. I was laying on the symbol of the Goddess, of Badhelia. I remembered my mission and I screamed again.
'I need Silvia! Silvia!'
'Sh...'
I looked at Silvia. And I almost fainted.


'Wouldn't you know it? You are naive, Chris... All Badhelians have their Sisterhood symbols under their breasts but the true leader has it on the neck, Chris. Haven't you already noticed that on your wife's funeral?'
'Ana...'
'Silvia.' She smiled at me,' How was your dream, tiger? Now you know about the sisterhood?'
'Damn bitch... how could you...'
'The leader's job is the most difficult one. I had to sleep with you. I had to be your friend. I had to tell your wife to commit suicide. I had to kiss you. I had to lie to you flawlessly.'
'You did your job perfectly, Ana.'
Some girl hit me and said:
'Silvia!'
'Bye bye, Chris. And guess what. I will kill you with your own knife. Let the ceremony begin! The sun has reached the zenith. The world is ours!'
Two girls came with a huge book and started reading in their unknown language.
'Kohlung profudlare dema Badhelia!'
'Dema Badhelia!' everyone screamed.
'Haodhik kiped jekof dema Badhelia!' they continued reading.
'Dema Badhelia!' everyone screamed again.
'Wait!' Silvia shouted.
'What do you sense, Silvia?'
'They are coming! Men.'
At that very moment most of the men in the city: husbands, brothers, friends, jumped into the dungeons of the temple and started killing their wives, sisters, girlfriends.
I was shocked. I couldn't move. I felt some hands on me. It was Mike.
'Mike? How could you...'
'Your insane grandpa told me. He's a seer and you would be dead without him.'
'Dema Badhelia!' Silvia screamed towards us.
'You bitch!' Mike shouted.
'No Mike! She can't commit suicide or the sisterhood will come back. Don't let her kill herself. You have to kill her.'
'Easy to say, Chris. You do it.'
I felt how much adrenaline was in my blood; I looked around me at men murdering their love, their own life. The sisterhood had to be defeated once and for all.
'Go on, Chris. Try to obey your given orders.' said Mike.
I must admit, I felt like a piece of shit. Ladies and gentlemen in one second I will be a murderer.
'Dema your ass, bitch!' I screamed and ran towards Silvia.
She already wanted to cut her throat but Mike stopped her.
'Now Chris, NOW!'
I... I cut her throat. And a very strange thing happened. Automatically all of the Badhelians cut their throats. There is no tribe without a leader.
Mike looked at me and I looked at him. It was over. The Sisterhood shan't come back. Men are stronger than woman. It always has been like that.
We started getting rid of the bodies. We burnt them all. We left no chances for the sisterhood. Us, men.
***
We live in times when globalization is a problem. Our city found some advantages in that. There were loads of pretty tourist girls in our city; many men married again and forgot about the damage that the Badhelians had done to this city. People do migrate and that's a fact. Girls fall in love with strangers and that's fact number two. However, I decided not to marry. I just loved my Ana. Even if she hated me, I loved her. She was my sweetheart.
***
I was on my way home after I finished my grocery shopping. There were kids playing everywhere. I noticed a ball rolled close to me and a beautiful young girl, aged about 4, running towards me.
'Here ya go, pretty lady.' I said.
'Thank you sir'


She looked at me for a moment, she was smiling. She had blue eyes. I noticed something known to me on her neck. It was the symbol. The symbol of The Sisterhood. She will be the leader. Thanks God that I'll die until then.
The girl ran toward her mum who was a kind looking woman. They both waved at me and smiled as I was thinking... Every woman on earth at least once has belonged to their own sisterhood. They all have their own badhelias. There is no stopping them.
Death is not the border to any sisterhood.

34 comments:

Anonymous said...

I knew! I knew it's not the end! :)) Muhahaha. Will there be a continuation? :)~

Anyway, it's amazing :) Really. Breathtaking story that could become a great movie ;P
And aww.. i loved that philosophical part bout sunken ships.
But still i have 1 question. Who's that creepy monk after all? Or did i misunderstand smth?

So Dyta, perfect job ;] waiting for new stuff :) luv ya for yr unique mind ;)**~

Edyta said...

Julinkaaaa!
'Your insane grandpa told me. He's a seer and you would be dead without him.'
Whahahahah. Insane grandpa.
"Breathtaking story that could become a great movie ;P"
btw! i wanna play the grandpa! the role is spesh for meeee :D
"yr unique mind ;)**~ "
YES! My doctor says I'm special :D
Thank u, Julinka, for ur kindness... awwwww! Love ya loadssss too :)
Buh byeeee ;)

Anonymous said...

shitttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt juliaaaaaaaaaaaaaa pffff i wanted to be the first :P:P:P but its okkkkkkkkkk ;) now cuz i am not at home and i am talking to my gf my sweeeeeeeeeeeet :P:P (guess who?):P no time to read ur story my edytaaaaaaa i am in romantic moood with my gf nowwwwwwwww:P:P do u know her ?
huh?:P but when i will be at home i'll read ur sweet story cuz i am sureeeeee its so cool i know my edyta's writting:) and now i am iving my comment and wait for my comment after reading part 6 yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay sisterhood :P now edytaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hearrrrrrrrrrrrrr meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...:P i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaa(by tongue):P maniac ahmed:P:P

Edyta said...

Yorkieeeee
whahahahhahahahaha. Yes maniac. :P
"i am talking to my gf my sweeeeeeeeeeeet :P:P (guess who?):P"
Dunno. Have no idea. :P
"yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay sisterhood :P "
cheerleader? :P
"wait for my comment after reading part 6 "
ok, let me know what u think abt it :P
Yorkieeeee! Ur the sweetest thing ever. I'll sue u :P I love u tooooooooooooooo. Yaaaaaaaaay :D Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah (go away) :P

Anonymous said...

Sorry for pushing too hard. Sometimes lines are too thin. Walk the line
This part was one of the best moments of the story :) So deep, it'd say. If it will be ever published, the last lines will be definetely quoted :)
Damn, everything finishes... Every good story I was reading, TV shows... Although I feel like it was time too, because good things don't last long, it always hurts to say goodbye... Cause we just get used to waiting for something.
'Men are stronger than woman. It always has been like that.' - are u dead sure about this thing? :) Was it suppose to be sarcastic? Cause we know that sisterhood will rebirth eventually :)
It was kinda sad to know Chris will always love his dear Ana, although she perhaps never loved him. It was very fresh, I'd say, after all this 'I'm a man, I'm a Master' stuff. He's not so bad, this Chris of yours :)
I think I've just made some kind of review :D But if Adas can have some, u can have it too :P
Pozdrawiam,
Agata

Anonymous said...

Ahmed awwww..... didn't know you wanted to be the first :P:P
You shouldn't have been so romantic, then maybe you would have outrun me ;P
anyway I know it's oookkkk, always and eternally ;)
gl for you and yr gf ;P

Edyta said...

Agata!:*~
"Sorry for pushing too hard. Sometimes lines are too thin. "
Nice quote.
"'Men are stronger than woman. It always has been like that.' - are u dead sure about this thing? :) Was it suppose to be sarcastic? "
Abt this matter. It wasnt supposed to be sarcastic nor funny. Don't forget, I was Chris. Some men psychology. I didnt mean to make an asshole out of Chris (but he is) I wanted to make a plain guy. Yep, they all r assholes (global castration! excuse me)
"Although I feel like it was time too, because good things don't last long, it always hurts to say goodbye..."
Its a song to say good bye... my oh my... Shiiit. I was singing :P Better not.
Ya think it was deep? Naaaah... I was as sleepy as hell. Maybe i should write everything at this time : 01.00 AM until 4.00/5.00 AM? what a vampire :D
Thanx for ur kindness, my dear friend/mum :D
Cya floating around :D

Edyta said...

Mariaaaaa:*~
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Nie trzeba :D
"Kill all men!!! (or better castrate)!!! "
*Drooling*
Maria? Agata? Nie zapomnijcie! 26 cm! Jak to moze byc. Ok. Over. :D
"WOMEN are stronger than men. It always has been like that. I know, you wanted to say that. ;)"
Yes i did :P
"And the sad fact is that you don't need me, your personal critic, any more..."
Of course I need u. :P Not a writer without u. *cries* waaaaaaaaaa. ok. over. :D
"P.S. I wanna play the grandpa... :`( "
Aww... I wanted to be grandpa (Bubbles) :D but anywho. Its ok, I can play... hmm... Well, I can skip this movie. I'll watch it in the cinema instead. Muahahaha. LOLz

Love ya like shit too :D Hubbssieee! :D
PS. Obmyc? whahahahaha. Moge stawic Sprite. Nie zapomnij, mnie nioe ma 18 (101) (oops) jak nie ktorym :D
"TASTY STORY!!!"
did ya eat it? :D
Kissesssssssssssssssss :*~:P~:*~ (phahahahahhah. dolaczam sie do twojej kompanii to get our asses kicked)

Edyta said...

Maria:*~
Yaaaaaay! But i still rather go to the cinema. Go on, call me a lazyass. I know i deserve it :D
muaaah 2 u 2 :D

xianfu said...

twisty writing there... hmm, full review will be released by Tsar... in 3 working days.. muahhahahahah... ^^

Edyta said...

Maria!
:D cant argue. Cala w swoja mama: ciebie :P

Tsar!
Shit. U just sounded... formal? LOLZ
l&r

Astronaut said...

Been reading the comments above. Please don't kill me! An absoloute superb conclusion. "Men are stronger than women, it has always been like that" Perhaps in a physical sense. There's nothing that can be done. But in other ways i think men and women are equal, perhaps in mental strength? I absoloutely love this one, and they are ALWAYS worth the wait. Thanks for the comment on spirited away, it is such a cool film, hope you get to watch GITS2, GITS2 was aimed at a smaller audience than the first because of its deep philosophical content, i think the director said something like, "I would be happy if 10,000 people saw it ten times rather than a million people seeing it once", i've seen the soundtrack of that in the HMV, if i ever get it, i'll send you a few tracks. P&H!

Edyta said...

Sams!
"Been reading the comments above. Please don't kill me!"
Read anything u like :)
"An absoloute superb conclusion. "Men are stronger than women, it has always been like that""
No that's not the conclusion. :) In the comments its just something that my friends voted against. But i wrote these words to stress some issues of changes in the men's psychology. On one hand he wants to be THE MAN, on the other he loves his dead wife. That makes it impossible to judge Chris or to say that he is a negative character or a positive one.
However, Sam, i made an ending that can possibly have a continuation. There is always a continuation. Through generations to come :) How vast? Perhaps.
Anyway, p&h Sam & Yaney, of course :)

Anonymous said...

OK I didn't see that ending coming. Great story. It is hard to get a good woman down and keep her down. :)

xianfu said...

... formal???..I think so.. aint that awkward???.. muahhaha.. lolz.. Hail Chris!!!.. Kill Him... Slay him.. lolz...

Jz cut open a frog today.. lolz... ^^... I can see a fly in its stomach.. how nice.. muahahha.. lolz... 2 more working days,..

Edyta said...

PJ!
"It is hard to get a good woman down and keep her down. :) "
TRUE!
Thanx for ur kind words :)

Edyta said...

Tsar!
Yeah formally awwwwwkwwwwward :D LOL
"2 more working days,.. "
Ya know, Tsar? I am scared. I really am. *shivers*

yana said...

First off, about the promise? It’s okies edytas, you didn’t have to do anything ; (. Or rush to finish the final part. It’s soooooo nice of you to wanna keep your promise. That’s sooo edytas!! Well…you know that I’m sooo sorry to hear about that : (. Did you know I cried? I’m a big baby. Crying is what I do best, :D. You know I am here for you, ok? If there’s anything the rat can do, please do not hesitate to violate my email or whatever :D. Edytas is sooo NOT alone!! And I also understand that you definitely needed time. Of course! That’s absolutely understandable and I hope that it helped you. Ya know I how you feel, right? I get that ppl deal with these things in their own way…and that’s totally fine and understandable, but just know that it’s ok to feel whatever you’re feeling. Don’t feel bad. You can feel sad or whatever you like, of course. You don’t have to feel pressured into be cheery….esp in times like these : D. what I’m trying to say is that you’re sooooo wonderful (always are though!) cuz you’re always such a joy to be around, you always make me feel good about myself (and others too) and things happening around or with me. Did that make sense? LOL. like even in this difficult time, you STILL manage to make sure everyone is doing well, and your concern is forever touching. Soooooooo super sweeet!!!! Awwwwww? Thank everyone? No waaaaaay, that doesn’t seem fair. We wanna thank you for writing it!!! for us greedy dogs LOL. share some poetry??? That sounds lovely…can’t wait :).” In fact... Nope, not to all :P :D~)” LOL!!! that’s my girl, flames!!! Not everyone is deserving out peaches & hormones :P. now I am digging into this feast!!! Woo hoo! Yay for another installement of the juicy fruit *takes a liberate bite* yeesssss. It’s already sooo tasty LOL. edytas, will you be my right hand…woman?! :P. wait….” his time I kissed her. Not to express my gratitude but to let her know that she was THE BITCH and I was her master” wtf??? Lol. HE’S the bitch!! I feel that way sometimes “I wanted to kiss her but I wanted to hit her” ya know that whole love/hate relationship. Sometimes I wanna hug ‘em, yet I still wanna punch ‘em for being WHORES!!! “Water and women are dangerous” LOL. women and octopi are dangerous? Hehe OMG! I’m such a pest: quoting edytas the great! LOL.“ it was long but it stressed the beauty of her body” I luuuuvvv this. People do not wear things that accenture of flatter their bodies. Forgive me, but I had to add that vain bit about fashion. Lol. that was sooo “what not to wear”. Yeah baby…” And it's you, men, who are guilty in the deaths of your wives. Blame yourself.” Take that chris, you massive whore. You respresent all the scum men! Lol. that’s soooo true, huh :” History coming to life is much scarier. I agree because I can imagine all of the terrible things that have happened in our world, and also personal experiences which would prove very scary! If they were to come back. LOL 'Bring the man!' another woman screamed.” I couldn’t stop laughing…should I serious? I’m sorry, I’m being silly. “so much for friendliness” LOL. forgive me, but it’s sooo funny. Awwww, “Even if she hated me, I loved her” me too. I find that I will love ppl who hate me…how gay! The next generation of badhelias? The little girl??? Goooo little giiirlll. LOL. “... Every woman on earth at least once has belonged to their own sisterhood.” I’ve yet to enter one…that includes more than one member (me). Lets start our own edytas! Yyeeeeeeeah. Hot. Oh, YOU’RE my badhelia, flames. LOL. * proudly bows down * omg….the end has come? The end of the wicked sisterhood?? There’s a sense of sadness waaaaaaa. OMG!!!!! Repeat: The end of the wicked sisterhood?? There’s a sense of sadness waaaaaaa. I’m truly saddened cuz it’s all over!!!!!! Edytas? Help me : (. But I must say, knowing that the little will grow up to the next leader of the kick ass bahelian??? Brings me a lot of happiness right now LOL. muahahahah, me is evil :P. I hope I do not forget to link this wicked last part. It’s soooooooo tragic though!!! i'm not being nasty. no waaaaaaay. forgive me...but men should NOT rule. there are only TWO sexes! i don't understand why one is better, one has to rule over the other??? sense?? ; (. i did't want the men to prove that their the more powerful species *is grumpy* LOL. i'm sorry flames, i'm not criticizing you at all. it's true, this conclusion does sadly depict our world. men are more dominant, they win, and that aint right!! lets change that shit!!! but we won't kill sams lol. poor thing. however, HOWEVER, i'm sooo happy to know that they will rise again. yeah??? there's always a chance, whilst girls are still around. you heard me, bitches. you haven't won yet!!! oh, and i want you to kill chris off just for me. i bear a grudge against him for sleeping with another woman. scums! muahahaha. LOL. Why am I so mental?? I just loved it. truly :D. I’m so glad you could share all the chapters with us. I feel very privileged, flames. Thank you sharing!!!! You already know this and I will always tell you: you are an extremely talented writer. I love your writings. :D :D. I would be honoured to own a copy of all your writings :D. sooooo precious that would be!! The style, the characters, your imagination is exquisite. Never stop using it!!! anyways, I tried to be short today. LOL. I always fail miserably : (. I just wanna say thank you also for the “I’m not your friend” (i have to return the favour :)lol. I was scared by that, actually cuz I thought when I only read the subject line, edytas is NOT my friend anymore? What did yaney do??? LOL. how dumb of me, huh? Then I read on and I LOVE it. I’m with you on all the fab quotes, I agree with ‘em all. Awwww, my twin knows me all too well. But I will reply your sweet email soon (sooo cute!) :D. before I whisk away, I was watching this crime investiagion show called: the first 48 hours. The cops have to solve the crime in perfably 48 hours. One case involved a murdered doctor who had a fetish of fondness of voodoo? This dark cult thingie? There were skulls, blood, names written on paper, candles, curses, etc…you get the idea, right? Anyways, they found photos of the victim’s male friends with the penis part cut out. Many of the photos had that part removed…and they said that it was a form of castration. LOL. that reminded me edytas and our voting to have males castrated, globablly! Boo yeah. We are sooo evil. Okies, I better leave. Here’s a HOT catslap….i can’t do it as well as edytas though. Damn : (. I hope you’re doing superhotlyfine today and zexily great!!! Cheers again so much for the story!!! AND for supplying your eternally tasty thoughts (edytas is SO not dumb : (). I appreciate all of it :D. Gooooooooooooo badhleiassssss. I love feminism. We sooo rule!! Yes. Ok, mentally yaneys are leaving LOL. p&h to you edytas & sam. :D :D

REST IN PEACE, the sisterhood!!!

omg. OMG *cries* that is sooo fucking long. i'm truly sorry. i feel bad : ( *blushes* at yaney's awful gibberish. i'm sorry to cause you pain LOL.

xianfu said...

..... Yanas masssivveee commment... is full of words.. even I get headache(in good way) by reading few sentences from it.. But seems like yanas decided to write it that way, lets all give her a standing ovation..^^ I know it has one more day before my massivvee comment, but since Im into the mood of massivvee comment.. I decided to give it earlier.. lolz.. Aint that sweeet???.. muhahahaha.. here you go..


MAASSIIIVVEE COMMMENT!!!

xianfu said...

that was just a joke dd.. Hope u do MIND.. lolz.. muahahah.. ok, here it goes.. Hope u didnt pee in ur pants yet.. lolz.. kIdding..how digusting of Tsar.. muahahaha.. Must be being influenced by the frog dissection.. Seriously, only rat or rabbit dissection shall be performed coz, in that way I can see the internal organs clearly.. And then.. I might devour them too... (unlikely yet).. Muahhaha.. tsar is not fond of wild animals yet... I define rats and rabbits as wild animal.. mINd u if that was queer.. muahahah.. ^^... The frog heart was still beating during the frog dissection.. We thought it was dead.. muahahahah... Anyway, we can ensure you all the specimens are under cholrofoam..which I think, they are already dead by then.. ^^... Ok, stop the craps now..For the review... Ok, lets go... Since "The Sisterhood" is ended now.. So, I shall bear no grudge against it though..that slipped out.. muahhhaah.. *still devouring the kinder bueno that dd gave me*.. damn yummy!!!.. Hope u wont make a sequel to the sisterhood.. muahhaha.. Im mean.. Tsar represents all the guys out there also request dd to write a story entitled: The "Brotherhood"..julia even said it could be a movie... hmm... seriously.. dd, r u gonna make a movie???... Chris is kinda pathetic to me... His wife only died for a short time.. assuming that she only died before a month.. Chris is already hitting on other woman.. Let me play the role of DD here... "Men are pigs"... muhahaha... Btw, the symbol under the sisterhood breasts?.. thats... unique..as I would say.. muahahhaha Ur right in not delaying the release of Part 6.. I just received news from Poland that a group that calls themselves Savior Edyta just started a campaign to revive the sisterhood.. few ppl have joined the group and officially calls themselves under the diguise of "PUTERI DD".. The situation is totally out of hand... thankfully, DD, u speed up the release.. Now we're all safe.. Btw, did I mention that, "PUTERI DD" consists of only 5, 5 year-old kids?.. muahahhaah Aint they cute???.. Carrying a banner that says "SELAMATKAN PUTERI"... lolz.. CUTE.. MUAHAHAHH.... I did give them few bites of kinder bueno too.. NO need to thank me dd.. :p How did the year 1996, 8th August come up DD??.. tsar needs an explaination.. muahahha.. lolz.. Tsar still thinks how to sabotage dd plan on eating more ice-cream... muahahah.. DD eats too much of ice-cream.. To add to the icing on the cake. she didnt even invite tsar... How cruel and awful she was.. Lets all sabotage her.. muahaha.. KIdding.. Dd Anyway, meanwhile still cleaning dd's pukes on the floor.. I just mopped the floor seconds ago.. sTILl wondering why I did this job at the 1st place... Cleaning Dd's floors.. MUst be the kinder bueno.. I dont know Dd IS this smart to use kinder bueno to fool me to clean up her house too...hmm, thought she is just an innocent and naive girl with a 5-year-old intelectual mind.. The truth has been revealed.... take off ur mask dd.. ur actually a wicked transgender.. lolz...mmuahaahahah... KIDDING... muahaha.. no offence to anyone... again, that slipped out too... :p, back to the review again... aT LEast cHRIS DId kill sILVIA(Long Live Silvia!).. and strangely, DD, u do need to tell that Silvia(Long Live Silvia!) can regenerate herself if she commit suicides.. that was... nothing yet.. then, Chris's grandpad is a seer???..And he actually told the others to save Chris??.. I thought he was just like Chris.. fucking prostitutes at the corner of the town.. lolz... Lucky Chris/.. XD.. The way Chris cut Silvia's throat.. (Long Live Silvia!).. reminds me on how to slaughter a chicken.. ^^.. DD, u admit that men are stronger than women??.. Does that mean, you hv given up the global castration???.. Wise decision DD... I know.. WISE!!! (exclaim Tsar!!!) Dd, in honour to the kids of 5-year-old... She even inserted a message at the end of the story.. How sweet(puke!).. lolz... Dd, u decided not to get married???. OO, suit yourself.. someone might not been happy with that.. I know Tsar isnt... mihahahhah... Small kids call u "SIR???!!!" Hmmm... seriously dd, u need to wear some skirts, blouses and perfumes.. muahahha.. that slipped out again.. Geez, I dont think I can keep all the cats in the bag though.. they keep jumping out.. muahahahah... Don't worry dd, Tsar was only joking..ur sweet,tender n juicy.. Hmm,if you do some double or triple thinking.. it actually means the perfect epitome of a sirloin steak!!.. i heard that King Henry VIII loves sirloin steak too.. muahahahhah.. I hope that girl grows up and be a woman that fights for free sirloin steak for everyone.. mauhahah.. She can be the leader of an organisation called... "Sirloin Steak Badhelian"... seriously, it wasnt a mocking.. (it was).. lolz.. We all need sirloin steak to survive.. Aint it so true DD???.. muahahha.. until Dd, are u feeling alright with the loss of ur uncle???.. We all are mourning for you.. Lets give another 1 minute silence to Dd beloved uncle.. I even wrote a personal eulogy for you dd.. Tsar is sweet.. dont thank me.. just provide me another 100 cartons of kinder bueno chocolates.. ^^ XD

"We all gather here to witness the burial of the honourable Dd's uncle. He has been a marvellous man throughout his life.. Devoting his life between work n family.. He was so successful considering now his life at it prime.. We all can sense the huge impact that he is now leaving us forever to a land we all wish for: HEAVEN. I can still remember how a noble man he was. Dividing time in his busy schedule for charity for the autism.. Not many man I know will do that... At here, I would like to say, we all feel very sad that he's gone now..May his soul be wit us forever"

hmm, that is my 1st eulogy... Listening to sad songs while writing this has made my job easier.. ^^... anyway... if ur offended.. Im sorry dd.. Sorry for my ingnorance, foolishness, dumbness, idiotic... eulogy.. :p XD - Anyway.. seriously, I wasnt mocking him.. We have too much death this past 2 weeks.. We all shall be geared up for some happiness.. Enjoy the wood.. Paint the town red... the wood red.. and even the world red if u might so.. lolz!!! Just dun finish those ice-creams.. tsar still needs it... Muahahah... Give me the one with vanilla and chocolate chips...

And for Silvia(Long Live Silvia!).. hope she is death forever!!!.. PEACE OUT TO THE WORLD.. MUAHAHAHAH....I know I shall stop now.. Since, I feel sleepy again.. U know me dd.. Im the Lazyass Tsar.. rules the world from his seat.. muahaha... Im gonna read the 4th book of Narnia, "Prince Caspian".. muahha. Tsar does read too.. tsar doesnt just stare at his biology all day long.. :p.. hehe... so.. Dd isnt gonna be afraid of this miniscule comment.. I know she will be eating her ice-cream too.. But no worries.. I have kinder bueno in my mouth to shut me up.. yAhoO..HOhhooohhooo...

jOY N lOVES from the cute, annoying, sweet, cool, fantastic Tsar.. muahahah... :p
muAKZ!!! (puKE!)

xianfu said...

and u ask Tsar was that a full review of The Sisterhood???.. Nope.. coz, Tsar is a lazyass KING.. muahah

Edyta said...

YANEYYYYYYYYYYYYS!
OMG! How cute was that? SUPERCUTE. Oh noooo, i'm not worth ur sweet sympathy, i'm such a dirt bag :) & I must stress that ther was nothing cuter than ur supersweet conern! hurray for Yaney!
Y aknow, that i am not ur friend mail scared the shiiiiiiit outta me too in the first place, maybe this makes the reader enter it faster? Huh? Tricky move :D
"Did you know I cried?"
oh nooooooooooo! *waaaaaaaaa* i didnt mean to make Yaney cry. OMG! Such kindness!
"but men should NOT rule. there are only TWO sexes! i don't understand why one is better, one has to rule over the other??? sense?? ; (. i did't want the men to prove that their the more powerful species *is grumpy*"
Yessss! This is what i wanted to prove. May haps the bitches (men) want to show how dominant they r (in their retarded imagination, of course) still, women dont give up hope. They just dont. They weill devour more & more souls. The point is that maybe this cute little girl in pink shall win against gender nequalty? Maybe she will. If she wont then maybe another Silvia's soul taker will. U never know what's gonna happen. It's like a continuation of the idea that men (whores) did not win. & never will.
Maybe they r stronger physically but they r not smarter or better.Besides nowadays & throughout history the badhelian women were not the only female warriors. surely not. look at all those women who were fighting for equalty & for women rights! They r big ppl, educated & smart. SURELY! why r there so many feminism organisations? HUUUUH< BITCHES? Who will answer? Easy cuz no girl wopuld like to be raped while just going home from a party/from a friend. WHAT THE FUCK IS BAD IN THAT? men do not know where to put their dicks, the sluts. Thats why i vote for global castration it will be so much safer in a penisless world (?) LOL :D Ok, so maybe i didnt make sense. but i think Yaneys got it. But wait? Penisless world? Where do i get such words? LOL :D How unethical of me. I DONT CARE! LOL :D
"Anyways, they found photos of the victim’s male friends with the penis part cut out. Many of the photos had that part removed…and they said that it was a form of castration. LOL. that reminded me edytas and our voting to have males castrated, globablly!"
OMG! Really? Yaaaay that Yaney remembered me : the asshole :D YA know, its kinda scary all that voodoo :) I've watched a movie, called The Skeletton Key & there was a topic abt Hoodoo or something which was kinda scary, ya know? That black magic. In general, how interesting is black magic? Witchcraft? That also reminds me of a movie called The Blair Witch Project. OH MEEE GAWD! That movie was trully scary cuz it was made as a documentary & shiiiit. maybe u have watched it? Well, yeah, i guess, i am a movie junkie :D but hey ;)
BTW! I cant stop reading ur Oscar Wilde Wisedom!
OK! Enough bitchslap from THE EDYTAS!
Awww thanx for the HOT CATSLAP! Here's one for ya too :)
Hope ur SUPERHOTLYFINE & ZEXILY GR8. :)
P&H to u & Samey :)

Edyta said...

Tsar!
Go save ur blog before i destroy it... oops... already have :P

xianfu said...

damn, seriously.. utterly.. u almost destroyed it.. ALMOST.. I MANAGED TO PRESS THE PANIC button.. consider today is ur bad hair day.. muahahaha... keep the doll.. coz it wont be long... muahahaah

xianfu said...

damn... I can access ur blog now.. which means I cant declare it as a holiday... WE all want a holiday... lolz

Astronaut said...

Shite sorry edytas, no i didn't mean to say that men are stronger than women is the conclusion, i meant that it was a superb conclusion, the men are stronger than women bit was a different topic, i should have paragraphed. I did what yana does sometimes, quote the thing and comment on it. Sorry i must have got you mixed, up i seriously didn't mean to say that men are stronger than women is the conclusion, i meant to say, that it was just a good conclusion. P&H!

Anonymous said...

edytaaaaaaaaaaaa hmmmmmmmm idon't want any one see my comment:P hmmmm why didn't they help us ?:| i swear its not agame how could u say that ?:| omgggg.. any way no one can understand us :| no one can sooo plz just leave us alonee :| its our life :| our destiny:| she is my soul :| edytaaaa i think u know what i mean :) thats it i love u :)

Edyta said...

Tsar!
Did u just press the Execute button just like in LOST? Remember the numbers well, tsar, remember them well :P
l&r... & some rehabilitation after i brutally destroyed ur page :P

Edyta said...

Sam!
No biggy at all :) U have the possiblity to interpret as u like. U do not have to necessarily agree with my statements, they sometimes can be wrong, of course. Even if u did mean what i understood, its ok becoz thats what comment boxes r for :)
Peace & Happiness, Sam! Don't even bother apologizing:)

Edyta said...

Yorkie:*~
It's all ok :) I understand u & u understand me :) thats sooo important. Thank you kindly for a mysterious comment. It was soo hot :) Love u loads & hope ur smiling now. HOT stuff :P

Anonymous said...

Hey woman! I hope you are safe and well. Eggplant is a favorite of mine this time of year. The harvest has started here and fresh fruits and veggies are abound. yummy. What time of year is it there? WE are in mid summer here. Hot Hot Hot. It has been in the high 90s everyday. OK I am ready for Fall to come.

Anonymous said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww edytaa is it last part? why the hell?:P:P i want part 7:( cuz not fair end:|:P:P really sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet :) yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay did u write this part by ur self? huh?:P omgggggggggggggggg damn edytaaaa we r together and can u exchange ur brain with my brain i want urssssss:P any way u will have yorkie's brain (not bad:P:P) omg... i have the best gffffffff creative yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :P i love u muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah for ur part 6 (not by tangue) but on ur cheeks:P:P my edytaaaaaa:)

Edyta said...

PJ!
Heya to urself, my fellow woman ;)
Veggiiiiies forevaaaaaaa! PJ, Yaney & me are surely in the veggies sisterhood, aint it right ;D~
Its flamming summer here too ;)

Edyta said...

Yorkieee;*~
"can u exchange ur brain with my brain i want urssssss:P "
Noooooooo! Hoe can i let such a brutally mad brain into ur head full of kindness? NOOOOO! :P
& it was a fair ending & a very realistic one. boo.:P
"did u write this part by ur self?"
no. silvia came & helped me. :P bastard.
thanx yorkieee, for ur sweet compliments... love u loadsssss ;) muaaaaaaaaahz muaaaaaaaaaahz (on cheeks) love ya loadss :)

 

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