Sunday, August 19, 2007

{missing you}


There's too much air
And the bed is too wide
It's even comfortable
There's a lot of food
And extra time for church
And a prayer or two
I don't blow dry my hair
And I sleep too much
There's no sudden soft touch
To wake me up
And no embrace to escape from

I answer my phone calls
I even call some back
I don't close the bathroom door
Nobody's going to watch
And my bras are on the floor
I've never picked them up
You did.
Some material things are left:
Losses, notes, laundry, theft.
If rain is just a weather
Not even a mood
That's when I know
I'm missing you
But you said it was ok
That we could choose another date
To meet.

92 comments:

agata said...

I really liked this one :) Proper music in the background, nice pic (although for few seconds I thought it was you) and I am now amazed.
It's simple, but nice. The mood of this poem is somehow unreal... maybe just for me :)
Well done.

Josh said...

This one definitely hit home for me. Yes, it is very possible to miss someone you have never met, and to lose something you never really possessed.

Great music too, highly appropriate.

Heart Of Darkness said...

Wow!



Widzisz, co umiesz, jak sie bierzesz za kark? ;)

Great poem. Great, great poem!!!!

Julia said...

;/ almost cried.
is it me so stupidly sensitive, or is this poem so damn good?
guess the second one. Love <3

Kao said...

I'm satrting to believe you are indeed a cruel nasty girl... You almost killed me! you can't imagine how aloud inside my inner defenses cried and broke down with this words.

wow that was real... I mean... You explained exactly how this feeling work... How it works on me... you redefined loneliness to me.

perfectly, except for the fact that I do have something to miss... Love...

well, after this confessions.. I have to say: yes! I'm teasing you!!! hahahaha! but you read, then I post sth new... fair enough isn't it? XD :P

see you, kissssssssssssssssssses and hugs...®

Edyta said...

Agata,
haha! & if it was me (which is impossible i am not THAT slim) then u wouldnt be amazed at all? i knew that u loved me so much! LOL. as u said this is true friendship!

Edyta said...

Josh,
i think it is but also, u actually always posses something mentally even if u dont posses it physically. i always had a dream buying a furby, in my mind i was talking to him, cuddling him etc, so i DID kinda posses him... just in my mind, huh? :)

Edyta said...

Hart,
"Widzisz, co umiesz, jak sie bierzesz za kark? ;)"

Najpewniej to ty bierzesz mnie za kark :D & push me into NOT letting my blog turn to dust. hehe.

Edyta said...

Julia,
i DID initially cry when i wrote this. i have mixed feelings nowadays. i had to get it off my chest.

Edyta said...

KAO!
"I'm satrting to believe you are indeed a cruel nasty girl..."
This is one of my fave compliments! Thanx Kao, that made my day!
I'm off to read ur Part 3, u teaser!!!!!!

Jay said...

That really was a sad one. I'm not a very sensitive guy, but even I thought that was sad too. ;-)

agata said...

Lol... no... :)
Although our friendship was always based on something like 'I love you...NOT', this time I just meant I didn't realize this was not your pic :) Perhaps it wasn't good idea to use a word 'although' ;)
I'm not good at expressing my thoughts at 1.44 am anymore. Perhaps I'm getting older...

Heart Of Darkness said...

No wiesz, it's a dirty job, but somebody's gotta do it...

Dobrze ze sie odchudzilas, grubasie, bo inaczej bym cie nie podniosla! ;)

Kao said...

oooo LoL!!!

well, let me see... I think I'm gonna post the play in two more parts: Rodney's which I promise will be intense and Alison's which is surprise... :P

and Yes.... I did post it twice... :s Ididn't mean to.. It was just the f*****g net...

:o I remebered this: at one of my teacher's office there's a sign that reads: "good girls so to heaven the others go anywhere, which are you?"

doesn't it fit you?? xD


and well indeed I'ma taser, that's why I'm a chocolate cake... xD

see you, kisssssssssssssssssssssses and hugs...®

Edyta said...

Jay,
U?
Not a sensitive guy?
Oh come on!
I dont believe u. i SO dont.

Edyta said...

Agata
Our friendship was based on hitting each other, screaming at each other & hating each other.
Each function was done lovingly :)

Edyta said...

Hart,
Oink oink :D haha :D
ale sie jako grubaska wiecej lubilam :S bylam taka miekka :D no moze juz przesadzam :)

Edyta said...

Kao,
"good girls so to heaven the others go anywhere, which are you?"

& where do u think i belong to?

Gledwood said...

did you write the poem to fit that picture? bc it fits it perfectly...

or did u just find the picture by a monumental stroke of serendipity...???...¬...!...??

Gledwood said...

hey do you know Glenn Miller?

I posted up this track that IS the sound of World War II

it is up until tomorrow (i mean tuesday) night... tell me if you know it... /if it means anything to you i am fascinated to know!!

Gledwood said...

btw HOW do you get to write such wizzy wordings in ENGLISH when i couldn't even write my NAME in Lithuanian...

so typical of today's world and the useless monoglot Brits ...

Dan said...

Very nice Eddy!

I think you should borrow Lulu ... she can take up some of that space. Not sure she can help you with picking up your bras, though! :)

Hugs Eddy.

eric313 said...

Edyta, you are a really good poet, and you are doing everything right, so don't change a thing. You have a good eye for what to say so keep just doing that, making each poem a story--a comlete circle doesn't have to be perfect. The brilliance makes itself apperant to the reader, you don't have to worry about making it that way. In this one and in Hints of Erotica you show that. I'm impressed!
btw
I miss Crashy--I bet you do, too! She just makes the day really bright, in weather or in mood, as you said. That was a great line.

Later on, Edyta

Heart Of Darkness said...

No wiesz, przytyc zawsze latwiej niz chudnac! :D


Wygladasz swietnie - jak sie czujesz, to juz tylko ty wiesz. Czuj sie jak najlepiej, to i wyglad bedzie najleprzy! ;)

curryegg said...

Ohh... lovely background with the music as the background.. I love this post!
;)

Edyta said...

Gleds,
Nah, i found this pic on a whim. I LAWAYS do that. How indecisive of me but yet so typical of me. haha :D
& i loved the retro tune, duh!

Edyta said...

Dan,
I think she can help me with the bra thing, we both r girls haha :D
& yes gimme Lulu at least for a bit <3 that cat fatale :D

Edyta said...

Eric,
Thank you! yup Crashie IS da best! & thank you for uyr kind words abt my poem-poetry :) i still got a lot to learn ;)

Edyta said...

Hart,
ughum oraz badz pewny siebie. A self confident woman is the sexiest one. Not to mention the most dangerous one!

Edyta said...

Curryegg,
Awwwww, thanx!!!!! :)
believe it or not it has been done on a whim! :)
like most good things in life, huh? :)

york said...

at last i got the chance to write my comment:P go ur grandmum's calling u :P any way i lovedddddddddddd ur poem yumie one!! baby ur the best writter ever!! sorry i have no much time cuz i am going out with my gf now:P:P:P no time muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahz my candy :)

Edyta said...

yorkie,
i wouldnt be a poet without u here :)

xianfu said...

yeah.. DD.. FINE..

u can meet me later in private.. :)

I stop my appointment on spreading love to ppl 2 c ya :)

now..pick up ur bras.. HAHAHAAH

PAPA!

Lucy said...

Nice combo of music and lyrics. Who knew you were such a poet? You know, poetry readings are one step away from standup comedy. Have you ever thought about getting on stage and droppin' some science and laughs?

We could use some cool chicks on stage!

xianfu said...

Dd.. dun hog the toilet for so long.. n stop staring at my crown seat :) it;s mine!


u kept me n yorkie waitin for so long Dd....

QUICK QUICK

Drama Div@ said...

no matter how much i love to be alone sometimes, I still feel that "loneliness" is somehow very depressing

Crashdummie said...

awwww, your totally breaking my heart...

Heart Of Darkness said...

;)

Your Q has been replied to... :)

Edyta said...

Tsar,
"Dd.. dun hog the toilet for so long.. n stop staring at my crown seat :) it;s mine!"
it aint urs! & i decided to take baths in the toilet from now on! so there! boo!

Edyta said...

Lucy,
Yeah sometimes poetry is so sad or sarcastic it's funny!

"We could use some cool chicks on stage!"
I aint cool but can go on stage! haha :D

Edyta said...

Drama Diva,
It IS depressing... sometimes we feel we NEED to be alone but other times we SO NEED company...

Edyta said...

Crashie
Sowwieee :| *blush*

Edyta said...

Hart,
off to check it out !

Heart Of Darkness said...

Scary, huh? We're like two freking peas in the pot! LOL


Um, I might be slihgly blonde, but is the woman on the pic by your poem looking in between her own legs in the mirror???? :O

Kao said...

Hey, I just Uploaded the fourth part...

hope you like... if not the last will surprise.. if you like this one, then the last will thrill you... xD

see you, kissssssssssssssssses and hugs...®

xianfu said...

nOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


I REFUSE TO believe it \\

ahmed, help me man..

Drama Div@ said...

i hate sleeping alone too...

Edyta said...

Drama Diva,
well for me it depends. as long as the person (people <--dirty) who r sleeping besides me do NOT in anyway snore :D

Gledwood said...

... "I sleep too much" ..(?!?)

join the club!!

Crashdummie said...

hahah nah, for once, I dont mind getting my heart broken - kinda reminds me of the fugees song "Killing me softly" ;)

oey, i didnt realize i was being missed - awww u guyz are making me blush, thanc eric & edyta, ur the best *hugz* :)

String said...

Nice prose! Are you headed to the UK soon?

Anonymous said...

Hi Edy, thought I'd say hi! Nice poem, as always.

I have no inspiration whatsoever... I wanted to write in my blog so long a time but no thoughts coming... -Berna.Ü

eric1313 said...

Hope you are well, Edyta.

Write more, soon! You are a reader, but you are a poet and a writer, too.

Be cool! Peace out.

xianfu said...

SOMEONE IN LONDON NOW!!!

OLALALALALLALAL

edyta said...

hello everyone,
i'm still here in london with no internet connection. wish me luck in getting one, as well as having time to update :)
i miss u all dearly :( i wish i had a moment to read what u have installed for ur readers !!!! (such as me or something hehe)

Yes, Tsarey, London :)

Anonymous said...

Nice, you're in London! Can't wait to hear about it. ^^ -Berna

Gledwood said...

hi Edyta WHERE have you BEEN??!?

long time no see

it is TIME to VOTE in the Great Gledwood referendum!

see my blog

hey have you considered being a pop star?

you would make a fantastic songwriter

seriously

i am just about to start learning guitar btw

Gledwood said...

wow you get a LOT of comments btw

Crashdummie said...

scoby dobey dooooooooooo, where are youuuuu? :(

Miss u hun!

xianfu said...

installed for my readers? Or..my STALKER? ...

LOL :) gud luck in getting internet connection DD..

London is a blast.. hahaha xD.. HAVE fun!

eric1313 said...

"Down and Out in London and Paris"
--thi9s is the name of a pretty good novel by George Orwell. It sounded fitting, since you can't get internet access to often in London. And it's supposed to be a 'modern' city. hummph.

Hope you come back soon. Your poems are beautiful.

Heart Of Darkness said...

Zgadnij kto...! ;)

curryegg said...

hey dear...
Why you didn't post lately? Busy with your work?
Miss your post here.. :(

Heart Of Darkness said...

No, niestety, mala - koniec z moim blogiem... jesli zycie mnie wezmie, tak gdzie zmierzam, moze bedzie nowy. Ale teraz czuje sie wykonczona - w kazdy mozliwy sposob.

Ale maila mojego i tak masz - don't be a stranger! ;)

edyta said...

all good things come to an end :'( nu zesz DAMN!

curryegg said...

Miss you girl!
Wish to see you soon!
New post new post!
;)

curryegg said...

Miss you girl!
Wish to see you soon!
New post new post!
;)

Kao said...

hi Edita... SO you're in London.. I don't know what it would feel like... i mean cities have a feeling that inspires sth... always...
welll

I do wish you good luck in finding an internet connection... I'm waiting for u to read tha fourth part of the play xD

and If not, I'm gonna upload the last part anyway... it'll still exist on blogspot server so you'll be able to read anytime... xD

and please write something soon... I feel like I need it... :S LoL


see you, kissssssssssssssssses and hugs...®

eric1313 said...

Hope you feel better, Edyta. I was glad you dropped by to say hello. Enjoy London and of course, best of luck getting internetm time to update and time to read.

Peace out!

Gledwood said...

Edyta where are you? What have you been up to. SOMEONE from Lithuania went to my blog the other day... but it was not you... boo-hoo!

PS How did the exams go?!?!

edyta said...

Curryegg:
U go girl, i really miss ur blogs!

Kao:
I'll read ur part 4 when i only find time to do it cuz its a busy life here :S i wish i had time to write :(

Eric:
I wish i could read ur blog :(

Gleds:
I wrote a comment on ur blog abt my situation, hope u read it!

xianfu said...

okay my twin.

now Im jealous.. how there's no message for me?

ps: u own mom 5000USD now. :)

edyta said...

oh shit.
i'm sorry. i'm sorry i'm sorry. i suck, ok, tsarey? well at least u r sooo privilleged that i speak to u online a lot!

Josh said...

Hey there, thanks for stopping by. I should have more updates about my trip soon; I'm still getting caught up. What I really need is a pot of coffee about about 4 hours to do nothing but email. Well, to do email and go to the bathroom, from the coffee.

Gledwood said...

Edyta how are you?! What are you up to?!? Surely they have a computer room SOMEWHERE on your uni campus... come on!! You must log on and say hi!
Post about what's happening...

I don't even know what subject you're doing....

Come on tell me!!

All the very best to you
from

Gleds
xx

Power Pneumatics said...

i miss your posts too edy! =)

eric1313 said...

Thanks, Edyta.

When ever you come back, you'll have a lot of people waiting to read you.

Take care!

Gledwood said...

Let me go find your comment... I'm not sure I recall FINDING it...

Gledwood said...

oh Edyta you hadn't seen my self-portrait yet, had you~?!?!?

Gledwood said...

Here I am!!!

edyta said...

hey guys,
sorry 4 the lack of me, i guess i will have net soon, gonna come up to u ;) & stalk ya :)

Gledwood said...

Edyta:

who was your favourite childhood bear character?

Yogi? Poo? Paddington? Rupert? etc etc etc...

eric1313 said...

Thank you for the warning! I love being stalked as long as I've been warned.

Take care.

gabriela said...

nu ja nie moge... musialam wsunac swoj niepasujacy comment. fakin' perfect. & it causes so much feelings...

Gledwood said...

O come on Edyta man! Post something else!!

Are you serious: there's no computer access at ALL at your uni?

You SERIOUS?

Come on let us know what you're up to! Write it down on paper and tap it in at the netcaff if you have to just tell us all!!

Kao said...

oo come on!!

I need some more of your writtings!!

u know i'm addicted to your words!!!

well, I miss reading something good...

see you, kissssssssssssssssssses and hugs...xD

Josh said...

Just to let you know... I liked that track so much I got the album it's from. Take care, hope to hear from you soon!

eric1313 said...

We'll get you to a hundred comments yet.

Hoping you're OK, though.

Take care.

xianfu said...

dd.

:)

havent seen u for ages. waT? ur rootin in the campus in London?

or were u busy enjoying the food in London?

anyway, im jealous. hahahaahaha

papa!

eric1313 said...

Hope you have a great Christmas season.

People miss you!

Gledwood said...

Edyta! Edyta! Where have you been?
I've been in London watching the Queen.
I hope your university studies have been fine
And that you've not been imbibing too much wine.
Right it's late and I have to go.
It's cold tonight, yet there is no snow.

;->...

Edyta said...

i love the world.

how off topic :D

 

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