Speak to me
You say pleasure
I say pain
You say distance
I say road
You say grass
I say asphalt
You say me
I say he
You say endless
I say ended
You say cheap
I say you
You say deep
I say shore
You say more
I say enough
You say drive
I say die
You say mind
I say soul
You say hope
I say lost
You say change
I say stay
You say smile
I say cry
You say calm
I say violent
You say I hate you
I stay silent
You say pleasure
I say pain
You say distance
I say road
You say grass
I say asphalt
You say me
I say he
You say endless
I say ended
You say cheap
I say you
You say deep
I say shore
You say more
I say enough
You say drive
I say die
You say mind
I say soul
You say hope
I say lost
You say change
I say stay
You say smile
I say cry
You say calm
I say violent
You say I hate you
I stay silent
Tool - The Patient
Cult Of Luna - Waiting For You
30 comments:
Yes, sometimes we say different things...
It's ok, when we speak with someone else, we are all different ppl, independent souls...
But it's hard to have such convesation with yourself...When u don't know who u are, when u try to find your way, but there are too many obstacles...You are lost, you are not what u dreamt to be like...
I like your thoughts :) It's good to read something written by someone, who u know and then think about it a bit, to find a piece of yourself in a masterpiece (don't deny it's not)
I will never be a great critic...I just see too many good things in everything...
omg! *drools at this place* i can't speak cuz i'm too busy drooling! lol. TASTY!
LOVE is all i give! lol. love this place. taassssssstttttttyyyyyyyy ;D.
yes! masterpiece indeed. omg, how scary is my new pic? it's HOTTER than my actual face, i think so. lol. got sick of my ratty face lol. ;D
scoobert looks tasty. sorry but i'm hungry. lol. hope you're well :D
hihi...finally..I will not be busy with skol at least for this week!!! Cool new template..sweet!! load faster when I use Apple SAfari web browser...lol...nice poem indeed... :p...anYway... liFE'S BEEEN gooood....HOWs urS???
I like the new look, and another beautiful poem on an ever more enlightening day for me, i have a feeling it may be good. A small observation, are you saying pain is unnatural where pleasure is natural, because when i compare "You say pleasure i say pain" with "You say grass i say ashphalt". Correct me if that wasn't the intention but that is something i am seeing. Maybe the same with calm and violent? Great poem, this has got my head clear.
pain is pleasure for some, is it not? when i think about pain...i feel a bit psychotic (well, i am) cuz it's been done b4, aint nuffin new so in a twisted way, am i inviting it with open arms? is embracing pain (esp mental) unsexy? i kinda see it as healthy cuz you shouldn't run away from something that will only (hopefully) make u stronger. i dunno. holy shit!!! this isn't my blog. forgive me, queen dragon. just disregard it...i'll just sit on ur comfy bed cuz this is indeed YOUR room, right? ;D. again, super tasty layout :P
mangue is a maverick
u can fill out all of ur thoughts here. don't give a shit who's blog is it. u can do whatever want with it. u can even molest it for crying out loud (did i just say that?)
u know guys... U made me feel so proud... Becoz of my poem eveyone had some swell deep thinking. And that made me feel worth at least something (other than a mental hospital room lol)
I am very much thankful, becoz u shared ur thoughts with me.
Sam
Well quite interesting observation if I do say so myself. Well, I am glad if u understood it this way. However I can tell you my intension.(if u do give a shit at the moment lol)
This was just a conversation between 2 ppl with different opinions. They were just mentioning some contrasts. For example:
"You say endless
I say ended
You say cheap
I say you"
A contrast between endless and ended as well as a conrats between cheap and you. (meaning that the person who is you is expensive (or rich) or likes expensive stuff.
However, the poem ends with:
"You say I hate you
I stay silent"
Why silent? Becoz if the whole game is contasting, then the other person whats to say what? Yeah I love you. Why doesnt he (she) say it? There may be a large variety of answers. I leave the choosing to u.
the other person wants to say what?*
I'm sorry for my idiotic error i think i had a hard day ;)
i just want to say nice poem nice good opinions but u know life sux every one has to hate himself yeaaaah hatred world noo love noooo peace only horror and pain i said my words from my depth of my heart i think i have no heart yeah i am sure i am trying to feel better but luck blocks me life kicked my ass u know no one dies virgin life fucks every one i think it our time to be broken all our dreams fucked up no mercy ohh .. my god just realese my this mortal life i hve no place to go only the hell can embarace me okkk my hell lets share our pain .. but i have my own tears falls from my sad eyes yeaah yeah i need ur help yeaah yeah i need to die just watch me while i die so who i trust i dunno who can i trust yeaah i know i know i can trust u u r my angel u look like me but .. did i bother u ..? may be u don't want to join me i think u can't coz its my own journey and i can feel my fade no one can heal my wounds only one i trust but huuuh now i am alone my wounds became wider my blood is a new blood i think its not ablood ohhh my god i think ... who am i ..? yeaah remember me ..? i just wrote these poem as a cure for my sadness so sorry guess who am i ..?:P hard day i passed :|
@Anonymous
holy shit... did i make u so fucking sad? :| now i honestly feel like junk.
Thanks edyta for responding.
write, read and listen to stuffs??? soUNds bOring..lol..so did u win?? NAh...u didn't sound rUde at ALL.. I'm OPen-mINDed... ThIS jz reminds me duRing my foRUm competiton...GOtta to listen 2 each team!!! 20 minutes each... My ass hURts muCh...for 5 hOUrs..IMagINE..How Bored am I??.....
Ur pOem's already Nice...jz that I'm shOWING MY APPreciatIOn...lol...
xianfu
Yup... It was pretty boring..
U had to sit 5 hrs? I wouldnt feel my ass at all :| So i guess ur ass is a hero lol ;)
MY ass is a heRO!!!! lol..... Bored Bored Bored...imagine the look of the judges..lol.. The competition was on without any rest...haha...KInda pity the judge... ahha... I jz updated my blog.. a simple post indeed... lol.. I also request an update too... It's been 3 days now... hehe... "p... aNYway.. taKE CaRE....
xianfu
yeah i sometimes also feel sorry for the judges. but hey... thats their job.
an update request? i shall gladly post something tomorrow or so. my post absense is due to my writer's block. i've always had the tendency to catch one.
"It's been 3 days now.."
ur counting days? lol i feel honored at the moment. thanxie.
Not need to feel sorry for the judges at all!!! Coz my team lost... They deserve being seated that for 5 hours!!! hahah... Im bad...!! Correct 'manage time better' always bugged me.... It never works u know..lol The secret?? nah....I will keep u guessing...haha... :p ......
Im still waiting for d updates....lol...
4 days now........lol.........pEace
xianfu
no need to feel sorry for judges? ok dieeeeeeeeeeee judges! lol
hmmm... u dont want to tell me ur secret? ok... i'll keep it in my dirty mind. dirty. very. anyway... here's a fresh update. as i promised.lol
lots of love....
hmmmm hey hey ... ehm ehm i am writing this story ( not apoem) :P for some one whome i miss :P i know its really so sad but.. u know i liked it so much :P She sat him across from her body .... She looked him in the eye.... How much do you love me?"
... He said: "For you, I would die... She looked down at her hands.. >>>"Would you ever let me go?"... His face turned very serious,
>>>And he responded with a "no... What is this about?" He asked... The girl only shook her head,
>>>"Nothing, I was just curious...But he doubted in what she said... Three weeks after this though..She sat him down again.. And softly she whispered... >>>"Do you think there is a heaven.. He stared at her intently.. Before opening his mouth to reply,
>>>"Yes, I believe there is..."
He pointed to the sky.. The girl seemed mostly satisfied,
>>>But her eyes held a sad light.. She held his hand and kissed it,
>>>And he knew something wasn't right.. Baby tell me now please,"
>>>What are you hiding from me.. She avoided looking at him,
>>>This wasn't going to be easy...Five days later she found herself,
>>>Cradled in a hospital bed,
..Her boyfriend right next her,
>>>Gently kissing her forehead...>>>"You're gonna be okay,"
>>>He smiled down at her.
Still in a little shock,
>>>That she had liver cancer..She had told him she was sick,
>>>And chances were very grim,
...But during the week he was tested,
>>>And told her cure was within him.. So when he had kissed his girl,
>>>He had been kissing her goodbye,
>>>How much did he love her?
>>>...For her he would die.... The girl woke up later that day,
>>>After a complicated surgery.
She had gone expecting to die,
>>>Confused she said: What happened to me?
>>>The surgeon looked at her,
.. >>>"Your man also went under the knife,
>>>He gave you his good liver,
... In order to save your life." So he hadn't let her go,
>>>But instead gone in her place,
>>>Trusting that one day in heaven,
>>>He would again look her in the face.
>>>
i just wrote it for edyta heyy edyta ... awake ..? :P edyta come on come on no one can see us ... muaahaa muahhaa :P huuuuuh ba7abek ya edyta :P:P:P
Ahmed
Awwww... Muchas Gracias! Hmm... Where did u get that story? :P
Anywaaaay... Miss u too :P
Shokran for the story so much.
Love ya loads, *muahz*
how is my fav dragon doing? i hope you're well : ). just wanna say a quick "hi"...omg, i'm so fucking rude! and than you loads for all your dragon love (and hot flames). you're the best dragon ever! yay!!! i'm so happy (can you tell how manical i am?) lol. you rule supreme. seriously, you make me feel so much better :D. of course you matter and shuld be proud of your writings cuz we love 'em!!! take care, ok? i will attack this place soon :D.
ps- stop swearing...your rude alien/european/dragon...whatever you are. lol. don't forget to help youself to the protein.
pps- sorry i can't read your new story. it looks soooo TASTY! creepy, huh? oh, and the comments doesn't work. i'm not special enough to enter : (. lol.
mangue is a maverick
"how is my fav dragon doing? "
pretty fine. i'm glad that ur doing better.
thnx for giving me a quick hi and an update that ur still around. means much, of course.
"ps- stop swearing...your rude alien/european/dragon..."
just edyta. one and only + ur twin. makes us both unique. *yay*
"oh, and the comments doesn't work."
hmm... i've just angrily attacked it... but it worked. time to sue it. hope it will start working for u too. (or scoobert will bite the bastard)
lots of love.
heyy i just wrote some words u can say ... may be a stupid poem :P but its ok many warm hellos :P larger than sea wider than the eye can see, sweeter than the honey of the bee did u know what in me ? :P if roses bring happiness , it won'tbring as much as you do, if love bring safety , it won't be without you , if god had sent me agift it should be you :)love u loads :P
Ahmed
omg... u r too amazing to be true!
ur a criminal! ur kidnaping my whole mind!
It's fascinating, unputdownable, indisputable(and other smart adjectives:P)
Wish u were here. Love u loads :)
Mr Poet, sir?
omg...edyta! all your comments/replies (on ur blog & my blog) are hilarious!!! what more can i say? you crack me up sooo much lol. so damn funny!! & of course super sweet. lol. thank you always :D. lots of tasty cyber love, ur creepy twin. :D. hope you're well! i need to repay you somehow. hehe :D.
mangue is a maverick
lol, don't mention it. i'm gad to bring joy becoz u bring love, while be both r creepy twins (how illogical, but what the heck?)
let's start a revolution. (i just felt like saying that)
lots of love :D~
i meant to say i'm glad to bring joy**
shit, i'm blind. lol
but the good news is that i am not the only one. *smiles to herself*
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