Poets
Your poets are writing love songs
Your readers are reading and crying
Your poets are writing about themselves
Your readers think your poems are about everyone else
Your poets don't give a shit about you
Your readers have illusions of poetic care
Your poets keep dwelling on their pain
Your readers see allusions to something else
Both groups are thinking about themselves.
Egoistic bastards.
My poets are using realism and reality
My readers are rising above neutrality
My poets are touching global issues
My readers are on a world repairing mission
My poets despise and ignore love
My readers take care of their feelings well enough
My poets don't read your poets' poems
My readers laugh at the tears of your readers
My poets hate your poets
My poets are better that your poets
Not that I have any.
Any poets, that is.
I prefer to stand alone.
As a poet, that is. 
A little comment here. I've been on a poetic meeting just the other day. They commented on my poem as, 'Why don't u write about love?'
I deeply feel at the moment that i am not able to write about love. The reason is that I do not really see the point & i dont see any new thoughts, that I'd be glad to bring. And... what the fuck? I write what I want and when I want and about what I want. Don't like it, don't read it. And maybe that's the exact reason why u r still in the romantism epoche/age and can't get out of it. Not that I mean to be rude. But hey, frankly, I don't care. Sue me.
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Friday, April 28, 2006
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gosh.... again.. u just make my head...wow!!!....
IM gonna hate ya for this... how could u like some insanely good poem???.. hate hate hate u!!!!
lol... with deep thoughts... arrh..ur making my poems look like plain shit!!!.....
sorry for not updating...thought my internet was gone.. should kindly update it later...
anyway... all d best..
take care...
Im so sweet... haha... Im d 1st one 2 comment...
cya!!
firstly cool poem (althought i was soooooooo lazy to read it till the end :P:P:P like uuuuuuuuu lazyass:P:P:P) now sue me :P and i am not holding the knife and threaten u to write romantic poems asshole :P and i know whats inside ur idiot brain:P:P(the same like me ) anddddd walk in the city haaaah ? so there will be alot of questions:P and don't worry i won't be aromanticass from now so happy now ?:P (but ppl don't believe her i know more she can :P )but u know edyta i'll try not to be lazy to read ur poem :P but u know i love ur poem or stories winnerass :P about throw down u r welcomeeeeeee my edytaaaa:) and this message not for u edyta :P (for all ur friends) new romantic poems of miss edyta coming soon phahhahahhahahaha just kiddin ;) and now edyta go away hate u :P my edytaaaaaaa.... miss u :| muahz my edytass :P knock knock (just wait for me :) )
Tsar!
R u serious? Cuz i have just melted from happiness. U really liked it so much or ur just having a good day? :P
Really, woooow... can't believe it. His majesty tsar liked my poem! Oh joyful daaaaaaaaay! Yaaaaaay!
Its ok abt not updating ur diary, do it whenever u want to, whenever u feel like it (as i do) :P
anyway wish u good luck
love & respect.
(i thought i'd be sweet too for a change, lol :D)
Yorkie :*~
"althought i was soooooooo lazy to read it till the end "
whaaaat? go away from here? why have u come here? idiotass. pffff.
"and i am not holding the knife and threaten u to write romantic poems asshole "
if u read it till the end , u'd see that i'm not talking abt u, u idiooooooooot. shiiiiiiiiiit. were u on my poetic meeting? hallucinationass? pfffff. :P:P
"so there will be alot of questions:P"
what? detectiveass? :P:P:P:P
"romantic poems of miss edyta coming soon "
just sue me :P:P:P maybe there will someday somehow if i feel like it & if i dont so there wont be any poems abt love. how banal of me. i cant write abt love. :P ur the professional, unlike me :P
miss u too loserass & just assass. or yorkieass. ahmedass. nooooo. asshmed :P:P:P:P:P ppphahahhahahaa.
love u loads, muahz. :P:P (go away):P
I feel like throwing my fist in the air and cheering! But i am in a public library so i'd better not. This is a seriously great poem. It struck a chord with me it really did. as for love poems, what for?! Better go now, i am running out of time.
I realised what it was going to be from the very beginning :) Cause I was there with u, that was about me, too...
U know, today Polish teacher asked me, how it was & I mention some nice words about that woman... teacher was suprised, because she really enjoyed my story and thought it was very optimistic... But hey, what woman said I solve my problems with a razor blade...
She says she knows...
Agata
They all say that they know me. who r they to know what i want if i, myself, dunno it.
they wanted love they got my regret. my regret of being there at all.
Sams
Thats soooo sweet of u. Thank you kindly. This is sooo nice of you. Really really. OMG, i had no idea that i'd get such compliments.
P&H
cool, chill....
...
glad someone feels excited reading abt my words... it's my honour indeed... haha...
I like ya poem very much...that it shall be my reference for in case I shall ever write 1 horrible poem again.. speaking abt my poem... hmm, I take it as a positive feedback... anyway... Mostly, I shall ignore the comment.. coz... ppl who give unconstructive comment will be ignored and silenced... Those ppl who criticise yet didnt give constructive comment... well... nvm.. guess IM jz to over it...
life goes on....
You jz reminded me that my blog is my personal diary... haha... never it struck my conscience... Me try to please everyone.. totally stupid thing to do... I shall write and post whatever I like... eventhough it doesnt make any sense... gosh....
DD.... hate u for inspiring me... hate you.. cant stand d fact u got wisdom... thought u were a plain ruthless cannibal... haha... sue me for that... hehe...
thought of a massively comment.. but... feeling my flow of brain juices has stopped... I shall end my comment right here...
j&l...
Tsar!
"Me try to please everyone.."
u seriously dont have to. its ur thing to do. u write abt things U want. & we, as ur readers, read it & interpratate it as we like. maybe share our own memories & whatsoever. get it? the only one whom u gotta please is urself :D if u like it, everyone else likes it.
the same abt me. i write whatever i like. its a pice of my world which i'd like to share. my own visions, my own poems, stories & crap like that. lol :D
"DD.... hate u for inspiring me..."
Damn DD to hell & back cuz this is soooo sweet. Gosh, I'm a walking inspiration. I dunno why but this is something sooooo cuteeeee. Shiiiit. I'm starting to be kind & sweet. Need to quit doing that. lol
As for Tsar, I wish u loads of love & respect. Ur da tsar, go show 'em who's boss (me!lol :DDDD~) Cya around tsar. Need to get healthier. :|
thnks for making me feel better... now I totally feel weird coz....dd d princess of cannibal... showing her concern??? Im so touched... haha
HAILS DD... haha... Im getting to becoming a cheerleader... from Tsar to cheerleader???.. Im will stop thinking about that...it's like a nightmare!!!
show whos the boss??/ obviously...it's me... but..I can't reveal my power so much...might hurt d innocent.. haha
*playing "Boss of me" by They might be giants"... haha..
gET WELL SOON.. hope this comment can cheer u up!!! :p
take care...
Tsar?
My personal cheerleader? yaaaay! how divine :D
"I can't reveal my power so much...might hurt d innocent.."
loooool ;DDD~ its ok tsar, they r meant to be hurt muahahhahaahahaha! shiiit. i'm getting cruel again ;) i'm getting back to myself, i guess :)
my concern is all urs. eat it. :D lol anywayz, off to watching 'v for vendetta' :)
"hope this comment can cheer u up!!! "
it did! cetainly! ;D~ thnx tsar :)
edytas victoriasss. hello my fav fire breathing dragon! how usss? i hope all the lovely edytasss are doing fine. i sense something has been up? please correct me if i'm wrong. i hope you're not ill : (. noooooooo. then i thought, wait, maybe this whole business with that asshole has caused my corspe bridesss to be a bit low? cuz honestly, when i read that part, i was devasted! what bastardssssss. let me get my whip! edytasss, you're totally right:"? I write what I want and when I want and about what I want. Don't like it, don't read it" ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY. you don't even have to defend or justify yourself to ppl like that. like wtf?? and this, " I deeply feel at the moment that i am not able to write about love. The reason is that I do not really see the point & i dont see any new thoughts, that I'd be glad to bring". i CAN totally relate to that, as my friend found my some of my stories a bit "dark & gloomy"...but they're REAL and actual (well, almost) events based on my own experiences. so what i'm trying to say is that (to him, i did) i can't write about things lovey dovey or soft clouds & poodles and all that cheery stuff @ that moment when i don't feel like it. it's not something that i'm currently going through so it's not going to be true if i TRY and write about it, it's gonna be false then and that's not my style. shit, did that make sense? i think you get what i mean? afterall, you think for me too! lol. i hope you're not too upset about these morons. man, pisses me off. knowing you're down would disrupt my juices.
ok, now onto the poem??? i truly adored it. *drools*. truly, edytasss. powerful stuff. well, to me it is. i'd feel really strong after i come up with something like that cuz it's like "take this" and what better way to kick ass than with words. poetic justice!!! ok, a bit crazy there. i got like the biggest smile on my face. truulyyyyyyyyy. you're sooooo talented. how can one not be amazed? i just love your style. it's sooooooo different and it's just like no one i've ever come across who writes in this wicked manner. you are not to be pigeon holed or attacked for your art :). and i soooo agree with the thoughts you left for Tsar, that you HAVE to write for yourself!! first & foremost. yessssss!
i sooo didn't make sense but i don't care. i am hungry! hoy sum for you too? yummm. anyways, i hope you're SUPERWELL, my corpse bridessss. lol. fuck those bastards and you continue your super amazing work cuz we love it :) and we adore you :D.
ps- oh, pleeeeaseeee tell me your well. yana mangoes would be sad : (. damn. btw, thanks for making us all feel worthy and cheering us up when we're down. that's what true friends do, so cheers x a million to edytassss :). oh, me love the pic. HOT. and i sue you, edytasssssss :P cuz i care. lol.
pps- SORRY for the masssivessssss. lol sue me for rambling. someone. i hope u don't drown. just get healthier & happier soon :D.
wait...i thought i was your star cheerleader. damn, i even made edible pom poms. : (
I didnt get d chance to watch V for Vendetta yet... arrhh... IM so grounded on movies... It's been a while since I last watched movie.. Which is totally so sad coz..I so miss watching movies... arrhhh.. anyway.. after SPM, My major exam.. I shall be glued to the tv and d cinema for watching movies!!!...
hope u get well soon..
enjoy d few days off!!! ...:p
joys n loves
My tastyyyyyy Bridesss Manguesss!
I understood everything u were trying to say & i muast say that ur super right.
we all write abt things that r bothering us. things that r ...hmmm well popular in our world.
well it was like this. i heard these words from the 'higher ppl' ppl with wisedom. ppl who's life is connected with poetry. well wisedom my ass. :D surely, some ppl do write abt love. why not. but why do we have to put some banners & walls in front of us...as if there r no other topics to write abt. cuz, seriously, damn me to hell & back, as i said they r stuck in the romantism era. aint that a shame for them. nevertheless, i do not have anything against love poetry, when i find inspiration & loads of experience(like u deliciously mentioned) i shall write something abt love. definitely.
shiiiit. why am i just repeating ur words? u've mentioned everything superwell enough :)
abt my banal self. :D yup me got sick, but i'm getting sooo mcuh better. even now. i feel like a million bucks. all that sweet concern certainly cured me supreme. :D awwww... as i've said before ur the best 2 in 1 bridessss & twinsss in the galaxyyyyy. shiiiit. me is sooo lucky :)
yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
oh & abt cheerleading. this is sooo sweet that u want to be my cheerleaders. (let me imagine that) i'm def a cheerleader of u all, as well as tsar with his brainy self, manguesss, the queen of rhyme&ramblings & surelyyyy sam the eye behind the lense. ic ould cheerlead for u all day & night. the geniuses. def.
Tsar!
This is sooo sweet of u! Quit being sweet! :P
oh & i wish u luck on ur exam. u wont need it btw, ur the brains. u'll do extra good. i know it. ;)
tsaaaar forevaaaa ;)
manguess... thats so cute!!!!... edible pom pom!!!.. CUTE!!!....
:p....
Edible pom poms? My fav flavour :D
U both r soooo cute.
(shiiiiit. i'm being sweet again)
isolate me :|
What a great poem. I really like it very much. As far as writing about a specific thing, that is plain ignorant. A poet needs to write what he/she is feeling at the time and that gives the poetry depth. Good job.
Im d brainy one??.. it's such honour to me!!.. haha....
hmm... more visitors to dd's blog!!!... yeah!!!... lol....
totally blurr right now.. and dun 4get the 123456 moment..
01.02.03.04.05.06
4th may 2006...
Time.. 01.02.03..
lol... ciao..numbers are fascinating.. u cant ignore them... hehe
loves n joys
PJ
Thank you dearly. That's trully kind of you. I got sooo excited lol :D
Tsar!
Numbers rule! Definitely. Sorry for infecting everyone with the number bug :D
Buuut they r soooo coooool! I'm back to my mental self :D lol
Love & Respect to all :)
Sure add me to your list and I will add you to mine.
You've been tagged, what you have to do is write six weird things about yourself and then tag 6 other people.
numbers always rule!!!..
thnks for being mental back again edyta..
thats d spirit my gal!!!...dun be shy for being mental.. there is a group behind cheering for ya.. but.. we shall back off shall d enforcement come.... from d mental org I mean... haha.... We need 2 spread the idea of mentalism.. so .... hehe... haha.. IM jz being evil..
SO, feeling alright now??...I jz realised that I ve made so many spelling mistakes and need 2 rewrite d word.. Obviously Im thinking abt someone... I shall stop correcting d words now.. hope u understand what IM tyyping here.. haa...
It's kinda weird that my class has jz lost it electircity thodayt.. so evil... nvm that... gosh.. it's kgetting horrrible for my speliing.. so..I better stop nbow... HV to protect my braingy image.. haha....cya..
joys n loves
my tastyyyyyy Bridesss edytassssssss! LOL. what an honour to be your corpse bridesss. awwww you, i knew that my bride would understand my ramblings, hehe. i knew it!! lol. makes me feel so sweet. ok, from now on, you do all the thinking, ok? lol. "higher ppl" ewwww. and "who's life is connected with poetry". WHAT? that unfair cuz surely, they're not the only ones. i dislike the sound of these exclusive moles. and lol @ "well wisedom my ass". i concur. some ppl think they have wisdom but they are delusional *pukes*. "why do we have to put some banners & walls in front of us...as if there r no other topics to write abt". OMG, i'm just quoting the amazing edytasssss here. lol. *hangs head in shame* i quote you cuz your thoughts are tastyyy and happen to be the exact same thoughts as mind. have you been rummaging in mangues' head? hehe. i totally agree, why shouldn't there be a restriction on topics? we should be able to write about everything under the sun. lol dam you to hell & back? i always crack when you say that! yes, they're dinosaurs. i just shake my head @ those who are trapped cuz they need to wake up, face reality and yes, it's a darn shame for 'em. their loss. i also do not have anything against love poetry (i love HATE poetry about stupid men, more lol) and i'm just like you: when i find the inspiration & experience, i shall do my best to convey that :D. why do MANGUES' repeat edytassssss' words?? cuz they're the best & dam me to hell & back for doing so. lol. you have said everything superwell, too :).
stop calling yourself "banal" LOL. cuz you're far from it :(. makes rat sad. but i'm SO glad you're getting much better. *yay*. i hope you're still feeling like a million bucks. "certainly cured me supreme" lol. i hope my banal self doesn't bore you to death. i only wish edytass to get better soon!! oh, this line cracks me up: "before ur the best 2 in 1 bridessss & twinsss in the galaxyyyyy. shiiiit. me is sooo lucky :)" hehehe. right back at cha :). how gross am i?
about the cheerleading, i thought i WAS your star cheerleader! lol. but i'm happy to share you. how fun does that sound? chanting "edytassssss rulesss". yep, i'm feeling extra manical today. it makes me sooo joyous to hear to say that "rhyme & rambling" queen. i'm good @ something. whoo hoo. seriously, it means a lot coming from you :). no, you're the genius, edytasssss. the best flamin HOT dragon in the galaxy.
oh my ... i better leave. i'm outstayed my welcome. lol. how annoying. don't worry, i'm being massive for the both of us...so all you gotta do is surive this!!! LOL. i hope you're SUPERwell, my bridesss. and thanks again for everything. always:). yaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy. i'm practising my cheerleading. i shall be around :D. take care now and let me know if you need anything ...or my "services" in removing pests :P.
oh yes, Tsar! i luv the idea of cheerleading for edytassss with ediable pps. the pom poms should be edible...especially for the supertalented edytasssss. we should make 'em but edytasss should decide what flavour?? lol.
omg, i'm such a disease. last words: how sweet is pjs??? i agree with her too! ok, i'm leaving now. for good.
Sams!
I feel so excited :P
I shall reveal how weird am i. at last! only six? i got stacks of weird things waiting to be shown. gots to be short :D
Tsar!
Its ok abt the mistypes. I dont care. I make loads od mistakes :D & i feel ok with that :D
i lost my voice again & i'm in search for it :D i guess my voice hate me :( how sad :D lol
heeeey, its the 4th of may :P~ even i am excited :P
hope to catch u online or something soon :P
anywAYZ, i wont be massive. i'm too lazy at the moment, i'm gathering information for the explosion of massiveness. i didnt make sense, i dont care :P :D lol
l&r, tsar :)
Manguessssss Bridesssssssss!
If u like it, so damn me to hell & back. again. damn me to hell & back. lol anything, to make u smile :D
its ok to use my words, they r urs. i stole them while u were sleeping. i'm a criminal, now i know, u wanna sue me, so plz, help urself, sueing is ur right :D lol
"about the cheerleading, i thought i WAS your star cheerleader!"
of course ur the STAR cheerleader. Tsar is the royal cheerleader but u r THE STAR. U also play the main role in the movie we're making based on The Mother :D Ur playing the spade as u wanted. R u ready for ur close up? :D
"i hope my banal self doesn't bore you to death."
u aint banal. never ever everrrrrr. rrrr.
"i shall be around :D. take care now and let me know if you need anything ...or my "services" in removing pests :P. "
those sentences made me feel important. wooow. delish. i'm sooo honoured :D
last but not least, i wish u p&h & protein. i am waiting for ur tasty explosion. yes. yum.
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