She
She is kept under the sheets
Of ground, dirt and grass
Sometimes asphalt covers her
She presents the lowest class
Sometimes she wants to escape
So she puts her new dress on
But a face as ugly as hers
Shall not be left unnoticed
Though she's exactly your age
She doesn't smile not she screams
She just whispers
Sometimes grins
She wasn't meant to be seen.
A hideous bitch.
Yet she saw all the things
You have done
You even cut her tongue away
You tore her eyes out
You've beaten nails into her legs and hands
And played Jesus Christ Pretend
You raped her and murdered
You've done everything you were able
Now even Heaven has a label
But she's waiting
To be noticed
You took her life, you took her fame
You took her defense
Now I hope you're satisfied and devoured by Pride
Because she was your Conscience.
She is kept under the sheets
Of ground, dirt and grass
Sometimes asphalt covers her
She presents the lowest class
Sometimes she wants to escape
So she puts her new dress on
But a face as ugly as hers
Shall not be left unnoticed
Though she's exactly your age
She doesn't smile not she screams
She just whispers
Sometimes grins
She wasn't meant to be seen.
A hideous bitch.
Yet she saw all the things
You have done
You even cut her tongue away
You tore her eyes out
You've beaten nails into her legs and hands
And played Jesus Christ Pretend
You raped her and murdered
You've done everything you were able
Now even Heaven has a label
But she's waiting
To be noticed
You took her life, you took her fame
You took her defense
Now I hope you're satisfied and devoured by Pride
Because she was your Conscience.
.
.
Godsmack - Voodoo
KoRn feat. Marilyn Manson - Blair Witch
31 comments:
ehm ehm i am the first one who writes a comment edytaaaaaaa sooooooooo coooooool was it reaaaal ?
asshole:P hmmm any way sooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee really really but why sad :| i am asking u now :P online:P love u loads :P
Yorkie :*~
Sure :P
for my italian/brazilian/japanese/i dunno who the fuck is that friend.
love u loads too... btw... how's our mental hospital? they didn't catch me yet. :P
I'm soooo tricky :P~ (unlike u)
*drools* woooooww. i have to come back here and re-read this piece of art. why do i get sooo overwhelmed when i read your brilliant mental stuff??? lol. maybe cuz i'm sooooo amazed & happy that someone isn't afraid to write about such dark matters. but i love it! lol. brb. hope you're well, edytasssss. love you with all my tears. gross. still drooling. this is fantastic. truly ; )
Manguesss
"maybe cuz i'm sooooo amazed & happy that someone isn't afraid to write about such dark matters."
creeps edytas surely are.
i'm writing abt this cuz i deeply feel that this is close to everyone who experienced seeing someone getting away with things without conscience/honour & without punishment for what he had done. bastards. lol
Maria:*~
Dzieki. Nie. Nie chcialam jakos to nikomu poswiecac. Poswiecony samej sobie. lol ja, wiem.
I miedzy nami durniami, jaki teraz twoj adres diary? Bo ty mowilas, ze tamty juz nie oficjalny (remember-maria)?
Prosto tez chcialabym zostawiac tam moich nikomu niepotrzebnych, gnilych 5 groszy. :D~
Love u loads Handsome Hubbs :*~
I love your poem! I wish i had more time to talk but i have only 2 minutes left on the computer. BTW-I am sure the political situation is worse in lithuania, even though it is not very good here in the UK, infact it would be a miracle to have a good political situation in any country!
Sam
Right u are. Just watched A Clockwork Orange. After ur desciption of the movie how could I not.
Thnx Sam.
Maria
I c... Miejmy nadzieje, ze reconsiderniesz sie.
Albo wrazie czego ja i twoj oficjalny wyrwe z paszczy krokodyla (twojej ;DD~) u know i can ;P~
So can u. Secret Taker;P~!
haaaah its not a poem like every time noww soooooo hungry so lets make it :P lets see what i forget to add to my chocolate cake!! put eggs,milk,flour, butter,chocolate, baking powder.... OOPs... i forgot to add (you):P u sugar :P:P:P not romantic hah?:P any way it was soooooooooooooooooooooo hard and strange day :| i'll tell u later ;) love u so muchhhhhh my edytaaaaa:P
I was thinking...am I dumb or wat???.....
Reaallyy...I Should open my eyes.. and make my minds clear... away from those nasty things...
It was a nice poem??... Yeah... at 1st, I thought, it actually beter b written in short story but...poem's better...
iF i'M NOT MIstaken... was it ur creation or?? becuz...
".
Godsmack - Voodoo
KoRn feat. Marilyn Manson - Blair Witch"
I get confused.. arrrhhhh... in order to make nobody feeling nuts or confused.. I should really have a long good sleep... so... until then.. Im hibernating..
Joys and loves...
Hope ur good!!!
Tsar!!
Greetings & salutations :)
Yes it was my poem & KoRn & Godsmack r just songs that i listened to while posting this poem.
It's as simple as that.
Yorkiee:*~
Eat me? Did i teach u to be cannibal? :P~
I c ur a good cook & thats sooo romantic & tasty.
Damn. Can I eat u? Grilled Ahmed with some of Ahmed's juicy juicy juicy clothes & a cool(just from the frigde)ice-cream cap.
& ur blood instead of tea. Warm, warm... I mean HOT blood.
I'm sooo disgusting & cannibal. Kill me now. :P
"still hibernating.."
shall reply comment later...
"tut, tut, tut"
haha
lol @ Tsar
whahahhaa
ok..after a seminar talk.. and a whack to my head from my conscience.. Im
glad to annouce that Im back from hibernating.. cHeerS!!!
Everyone..thank you.. miss me?? haha... Anyway...glad that Im back to myself... seacrhing for my true inner self... already done that.. :p..
Wow... ur have been visting charity org?? thats wayyy goooddd!!! Tsar is so PROUD!!! ESP Ur visiting for the ederly people... Im so touched!!!... Nxt time.. take me go too.. jz bear in mind.. Tsar only can speak English, Mandarin, Cantonese and Bahasa Melayu... So any polish or russian or wat so ever.. I can't communicate..
this will totally destroy the purpose of me visiting.. :p... I do care about my kingdoms too.. I jz visited PAWS.. :P.. Plan to continue it later on.. dunno when...but for sure..Im going back.. Hope d dogs and cates like me.. heehhe...
hmmm, PoPular??? hmm..Im not that popular in my skol..Often labelled as d good boy.. the smart one.. the chess nuts... Im nuts in Chess... dun worry..Study always comes 1st... after writing until here.. I thought of giving u a massiveeness... as a present from me after being hibernating for so DAMN LONG.. WHAT A WASTE OF PRECIOUS GOLDEN TIME!!!! ...AARRHHH, should've realised that soonn...
about gays???... hmmm, Im OKAY WITH THAT.. IM NOT AGAINST IT... BUT.. SOMEHOW....KISSING FOR MORE THAN 10 MINUTES IN PUBLIC BETWEEN GAYS IS STRICTLY... EVIL...AND ...MAKes me feel uncomfortable.. Im also OKAY WITH GUYS kissing me.. jz...not more than 10 minutes... it digusts me ok.. to LESBian.. Your're same too.. No exception.. hehe... :p.. Im Open minDED--- SO no worries ok...:p
I will tolerate anything.. :p
damn!!! I was in d cover again?? How do I look??? My white horse still look good after these years.. and my armour.. haha.. striking GOLD.. :p.. So pUre and heRoic... :p... hmmm, haven't seen u in the cover yet.. I wonder when will it be???... 20 years later?? Gosh.. Edytator...u should be urging to be on d cover ... so work hard..my princess.. hahahahah.... Im so evil... Im gonna launch another attack soon.. TO expand my kingdom... I can't wait!!!!....
This time.. ahhahahah hmmm.... I tend to forget ur comment " i was on d cover for so maanny times"... I dun remember seeing that.. hahah.. so the counter will be back to zero... hahahahahha....
Im feeling really good today.. for the 1st time in these 2 years.. Done my Maths practice!!!! Im so pRoud of myself..... Cheers everybody!!!! :p.. Im starting for my other subjects revision too.. No more waiting... Can't wait to able to answer all those questions(irritating) in exams!!!!.... I want to shock the teachers.. make them in tears... So they are so happy they got a student like me.....
Hope I can make it!!!.. Until then... Im being kind lately..so...my massivee ly comment shall end here... hOpe ur all FINE!!!....
JOys and lOves... muakz!!!
make sure ur drooling over the comment... jz dun spill it to ur keyboard.. lol.. Im so active!!!! haha
Tsar!
OMG! Maaaaaassive. Good ol' massiveness, indeed. Tasty. Yum!
"about gays???... hmmm, Im OKAY WITH THAT.. IM NOT AGAINST IT... BUT.. SOMEHOW....KISSING FOR MORE THAN 10 MINUTES IN PUBLIC BETWEEN GAYS IS STRICTLY... EVIL...AND ...MAKes me feel uncomfortable"
awwww... tsar... lol i dont really care. Let them kiss for 30 min, 5 hours, whatever. I dont really care. But i know that a lot of ppl r soooo much against it & they just can't watch them even holding hands or whatever. I mean... what bad things have they ever done to other ppl? I sometimes really feel sorry for them. Although it seems to some ppl that they r going against human nature, they never have done anything bad to other straight ppl. We r always the first ones to judge ppl & in reality... who r we to judge them? Who r we to make them feel different or incomplete or weird? We r not God or whoever to judge ppl like us. I sometims really feel sorry for gays/lesbians whatever. U can sue me but i still tolerate that. & besides if ppl dopnt like watching how other ppl r kissing or hugging so why not just turn back & not watch. I am not a defender of their rights & I'm not fighting for them. Francly, if a person is gay, so why make such a big fuss abt it, u know? Who the fuck cares nowadays?
Shit. I have to be a politician. NOT! U seriously dont want it.
Me is happy that Tsar is feeling better & oh so lively. Yaaay.
& of course i was drooling while reading ur perfectly massive comment. It was delish.
& weeelcome to our humble mental club. Here in our club u can reveal ur true inner self. lol
Ok, this is getting grossly massive & i shall end my story here.
Thanx sooo much for ur massive & kind concern abt me. & yes, i am fine & i feel delish. I'm sooo disgusting.
That's it, i need to BAN myself.
Love&Respect&Muahz
(i'm sooo sweet... NOT)
A waaarm thanxie to Maria:*~ & Julia:*~ for a delish day. Thyhyhyhy. *mentally laughing & drooling*
(Zydziara&Pridurek_Zhopin&DespoDyta&Wadzila)
Agata:*~
u were with us :) (but u dunno it.... Ok, now u know it)
Me loves u guys:*~. Thyhyhy.
Thyhyhyhyhyhyhyhyhy... can't stop laughing :) after spending awsome time with you :P thanx a lot, feel so mental now :) Yeah i felt agata was somewhere near ;) Luv u ;*~ cya soon
I dun mind gays and lesbians...
You know, I being brought up with Eastern values.. so.. it's quite awkward to see gays or lesbians kiss each other for like more than 10 minutes.. IS that necessary??... lol..If they wanna make out.. do it in secluded place.. Lol.. I dunno, I just feel weird to see gays and lesbians kissing each other.. In fact, I DON'T even mind having gays and lesbians as frenz... I should be growing up from this shell... haha... :p..
Everyone, Im not against gays and lesbians... Holding hands and hugging are totally okay... :p Jz kissing.. and if French Kiss is involved.. I wanna puke.. Maybe after 1 year or 6 months.. I won't.. haha....
Hmmm, Im admitted to mental club...
Membership fees? FREE FOR LIFE
MEMBERS???... THE NUTS MENTAL....
haha...
signing off...mental tsar.. lol
Ur so sweet???
or being tweaked?
:P
I FORGOT TO ADD...
BEING MENTAL WITH EDYTA... : PRICELESS :P
this box is mine!!! flooding time. edytasssss? everyone grab a lifesaver or prepare to drown. muhaahahahaaha. me is sooo evil. lol. edytassssssss? i fucking love this place!!! soooooo warm and mental!! i feel like i belong. waaaaaaaaaa. i love it here! we most definitely can be our true selves, cheers to queen edytasss. i'm sooo sorry i haven't been flooding (how fucking rude). so sorry!! i love your massive floodings. they're the best! if it makes you feel good, then flood away. lol. i hope all the edytasssss are superfine and that you had a safe & chocolately easter : ). thanks soooooooo much for all HOT friendship. everything is HOT around the super wicked dragon. omg, i'm sooo hyper today. even that creeps me out. edytasss, i'm sooo glad i found you too cuz you're the best cyber manical psycho in town. lol!! you've been sooo KIND to me from the very start and for that: mangues is truly grateful...for everything!!! : ). *pops champagne cork, even though mangues doesn't drink*. i love how geniune & mental you are (and how everyone is catching on, lol) but of course it's also your super HOT work that gets me going cuz truly, it's fucking brilliant. i truly feel privilged and also very proud that i'm allowed to enter your crazy world. lol. soooooo awesome :). omg, i'm gonna cry! someone just collasped by my love declaration. lol. anyways, enough from boring mangues. about "she". the verdict? it's soooo brilliant!! mangues loves it all. *drools all over everyone, sorry* and "i'm writing abt this cuz i deeply feel that this is close to everyone who experienced seeing someone getting away with things without conscience/honour & without punishment for what he had done. bastards. lol". mangues definitely agrees with that cuz it's sooooo true: most of us have seen or know of someone (or evern ourselves) who has endured some kind of awful shit. i see it all the time. it's sooooo terrible. mangues will never understand how ppl can do the most horrible things to another human being...and not feel any remorse. that's sickening & pure evil. it's my through my obeservations & own experiences that i believe some ppl don't possess a conscience. that makes me cry. hows about edytassss, mangues & all the other mental edytassss fans rally up, and dispense justice? lol. omg, i better leave. masssssssivvvvvvveeeeeeee manguessssss is still massive. so sorry. oh, and please don't ever apologize cuz it's no unnessary : ). before i get escorted out, i LOVE your thoughts on the whole lesbian/gay kisssing in public. edytassss? from now on, mangues doesn't need to think cuz you do it for both of us! lol creepy cyber twin is leaving *waves goodbye*. once again, thank you for all you've done! you're sooooo SWEET and just the best *yay*. mangues just saw queen of the worlds faint. lol. i hope you're SUPER well, all of the super talented adorable edytassss. peace & happiness, dragonsss.
ps- so fucking sorry for borin you. *cries* i need help. bad. lol.
You are so very right edytas. No way did i find it offensive! As i have said before, my great grandfather immigrated from lithuania to here, changed his name from stanislav to stanley. Peace and happiness!
Tsar!
"I FORGOT TO ADD...
BEING MENTAL WITH EDYTA... : PRICELESS :P"
loooool @ it. Is that our Mental Zoo's new slogan?
Gays & lesbians... Oh come on, tsar, let them live their life. Dont mind them. I dont find it as a big problem. lol
U can hopp all around the room now! Me got some nice news! Ur room is right besides mine in our mental zoo. looool
L&R
yana manguesss
ur just too sweet to be true! r u sure ur real? maybe i imagined u lol
"edytassss? from now on, mangues doesn't need to think cuz you do it for both of us!"
i always think abt it whilst reading ur blog. lol aint that a coinsidence? naaah. lol
"ps- so fucking sorry for borin you. *cries* i need help. bad. lol."
do not be sorry. u have ur rights to molest anything u see here. massiveness is sooooo cute. lol
P&H
Sam
I remember ur grandfather's story.
Immigration is way ok with me. Yet a lot of ppl r concerned abt their roots & family traditions.
I've never been like that.
I found ur political views quite simmilar to mine. This made my day.
P&H
gosh...manguess... she going to be massiiivvveeee....
hmmm...so freaking sad!!!... Now IM using Mac computer..which makes me no mood to update..I think I might update tomorrow... :p..
till then... PRICELESS...
THAT COULD B OUR NEW MENTAL SLOGAN!!! HEHE....:p....
CHEERS!!!!
edytassss? i can say the same about you 2. lol! i made you up! i don't mean to sound pompous or weird. lol. but ppl always seem to say that: to good to be true. *cries*. i can't help it. maybe it's cuz i'm a freak, i just love freaks cuz i am one. lol. i dunno what else to say cept i will continue to molest cuz it's my right! i love it here. anyways, this aint gonna be massive. for once!! lol. i hope your SUPER well, my dragonsss. peace & happiness to you. always :D.
Tsar!
Dont be away for too long. I'm addicted to u. lol
Hope u'll correct ur error & be back calmly & peacefully.(i'm sooo kind-hearted today...not) lol
Yana Manguesss
this is soooo sweet... i think i'm gonna cry ;( waaaaaa...
oh u wait, i shall molest ur place shortly. lol
p&h to u too. always. eternally. forever. TAAAAA. lol
Very pretty design! Keep up the good work. Thanks.
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